@fluffybonezz Wow, that is a great resource thank you!
I had a couple of people red line my work (praise the Lord for those patient people) and one person who re-paneled the whole thing. I took my favorite looks from everything folks sent back to me and here we are:
I ended up totally reworking the page, because the writer made a good story point about the young man wouldn't want to kill the men he had been trained under. She wanted to make it clear that he just knocked them out. So that was something to consider.
Gosh what a terribly challenging set of pages. This is the last page of the "fight" part of the scene, so I'll stop bugging you all about this! THANK YOU FOR ALL THE HELP!