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May 2020

Hello, and Good day everyone!

I'm posting here because I just posted the prologue to my comic The Turtle That Flew.

I was wondering if anyone would be kind enough to tell me what they think, and what I can improve on? Also I'm new to Tapas so, any general tips on how to navigate the site, would be great as well. I look forward to reading any replies, and making new friends!

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I've found the start of your story really compelling. Good pace, well written and detailed and clean art. I'd say you are starting right your aventure here.

I've not been here too much nor do I consider myself an expert of webcomics at all, but depending on what your intentions are, I may have some advise:

Tapas is very social. Don't be afraid of interacting with other people. Read others, subscribe the ones that you findi interesting, then share your work with others and you'll have some fun.

Keep up the good work!

I found that the story was really interesting. One thing I would like to say about the typography though. Add margin space for your text, and give your text breathing room. It will make your comic look that much nicer and professional. That is pretty much the only thing I have to say, because I love everything else.

Looks interesting enough, and also quite professional, too. :thumbsup:
However, the title together with this too short description, is somewhat misleading - at least, for me. :sweat_smile: When I clicked, I thought it was about actual turtle, rather than human. :joy_cat: