No one is successful alone! Let's grow together

[mastermie001]

Okay, you really did me dirty on this one. How many books?!

Anyways, as long as it helps you. I'm down on it.

1) I Love My Yandere Neko Girlfriend

On the 6th frame of the first chapter, you need to correct your texts.

You wrote, "Other than school we haven't hanged out with eachother recently, so why don't we all do something together?"

Can you correct it to, "Other than school, we haven't hung out with each other recently. So, why don't we all do something together"?

Plus, I like your art, good job. I'm sorry I couldn't give you a well in-depth review of your comic. In conclusion, I love the book.

2) Pink Flower Romance

It's sad. I really feel sorry for Colette. Being pregnant and having to deal with pregnancy? In conclusion, I like everything about the book. Good job.

3) Purpose within

Nice comics, also love the artwork.

4) Cheat Master

Please, can you kindly make the details easier to understand? There's a lot of information you are trying to convey, but, I couldn't quite understand it properly.

As for the rest, its all good.

[mastermie001]

Okay, Where do I start from?

1) Your Synopsis

Can you try to change the synopsis a little? From the synopsis, the first thing I'd understand from it is that Jaime and Jade are in a relationship. The other thing is that they are going a long journey across America. Now, saying that Jade is dead automatically makes the story all about Jaime and how she fared after Jade's death. You can rephrase it so that it's clearer that way, people can understand he died along the way, leaving Jaime alone to fend for herself.

2)Frames count

You need to kindly consider this, add more frames to your page! Please, your chapters are too long, and you need to color your comic from the prologue all the way to chapters 3, page 4!

Please, as a reader. If not for the content of your comic, I wouldn't like it at all when reading the first 3 chapters. This is all due to the lack of color! Please, please, kindly color them! Also, add more frames to your chapter before posting it. 3-5 frames are not enough! I know drawing is hard, especially for comics, but please, kindly consider these things.

All in all, I love your comic. Nice work bud!
-Olisa Kings

[mastermie001]

Alright, first of all.

1) Synopsis

You need to go back to your synopsis and explain what an Ani-man is! How are readers meant to know who, or what an Ani-man is supposed to be from your synopsis? Please, kindly keep in mind that they most likely haven't even opened your book yet!

If not for that, your book is good. Nice work bud!

Yours sincerely,
-Olisa Kings

[mastermie001]

No problem. You have a nice book by the way! I like it.

[mastermie001]

I mean, it gives insight to your personal experience. However, some may find it childish from the drawings, but the content are engaging.

I know you are new, so as a newbie, good job. Keep it up!

Also, all the best on your comic!

[mastermie001]

Yh, your comic is okay. You need to add more frames into it. You also need to make each chapter more engaging. Your synopsis needs more work! You should re-do it! I wouldn't read it in all honesty just by reading the synopsis. Please, kindly re do it if you want more reads and likes.

That's all from me, good job bud!

[NatAberdeen]

Thank you very much! I'm always looking for ways to make my text more concise. I appreciate the feedback.

[mastermie001]

No! We don't do this? How can people take your comics seriously like this? Please, kindly make them all actual comics not photos uploaded.

Except for that, all your 8 works are interesting. Just make it an actual comic with arts and texts, not photos uploaded.

Hope I was able to be helpful, have a great day!
-Olisa kings

[mastermie001]

GREAT JOB! I LOVE YOUR ART WORK!

Your comic is fluid, and smooth. Just work harder to make your synopsis more interesting! Except for that, your work is exceptional. I understand it's meant to be in black and white, but don't you think it would be even better colored? Please, kindly give it a thought.

Nice work, can't wait for more!

[DNoble]

brand new update! awesome-looking backgrounds! character drama! I promise this will be a sci-fi action comic very soon.

Interstellar Hero: Nova Ranger | Tapas

[AmazementComics]

What do you mean, it's not just photos uploaded, did you actually look at our other comics? Because they are actual comics.

[PaulDevers]

Thanks for the feedback!
I've been meaning to re-write that blurb for a while now, I'm just not entirely sure what to write for it so far. Need to think a little on that.
For the comic itself, I actually have been going back and coloring old pages! It's slow going, and frankly, should have been coloring them the whole time as I was going along. I was really self-conscious about my coloring back then, which is why I didn't. I just don't know whether or not to post them as I go or not. I'm worried about having like, 8 colored pages, then back to B&W for the next two chapters, then back to color again. I figure that I'll just change'm all when I have all the color pages, or at least chapter by chapter.
As for frames, that's just how I do pages? It's not on a frame number, it's just the frames I have for the page? It's all sized out for book size, because I'm a sucker for traditional book sizes. The frames change number from page to page. Sometimes it's six, sometimes it's nine, it all depends on the page. I'm not quite sure what I can do about that, outside of see if I can draw more than one page per week? But I got a full day job and other projects I'm working on besides the comic, so I'm not sure how feasible that is right now.
But all in all, thanks for reading! It's nice to actually get honest feedback! Your one of the first people to actually give me proper critique, and things that I can actually strive to improve on!

[ricardoaltuna]

Your story sounds very interesting, I just subbed to it

Here's my comic Auster.

Genres: Action / Horror / Urban Fantasy

"Fearful that he'll be alone after his friends move, Dasch Karde, a socially anxious teen that doesn't remember his childhood goes to meet the sender of a mysterious letter that promises to bring back his memories and reunite him with old friends.

But he ends up entering a world of conspiracies and secret organizations.

In a world in which people develop superpowers based on their trauma, which side will he choose? Find out in Auster."

Auster: "Protecting you from the shell" | Tapas

[dreangelo]

Thank you very much for the critique! I will definitely consider your advice and matter of fact, I have created another cover that I’ll be showing soon 🏽

[Drag0nPrincesS]

Colour is something that if it does pop out it will have specific meaning, it was deliberate, and I have to stand ground with that, it's funny because my mom also has told me this, but at the same time I got friends who do like this B&W thing so it's personal preferences I believe.
as for the synopsis well, I guess I gotta rework it, which I haven't stop doing so ever since, I guess reading synopsis may help thanks for the tip :D!
and keep working on your stuff pretty interesting too :3c
Might need to re-read it haha to make a more elaborate opinion.
good luck and take care don't force yourself to read these many people's artwork and give yourself a treat!
Make sure other people also read other stuff amongst themselves after all it's about all of us :3c!

[murkrow729]

That's good to hear. Thanks for checking it out!

[Viridis]

My comic is light heart and heartwarming, about kpop idols and them finding out something about their future? lol Its pretty hard to explain. It can also be a little dark, its about a sociopath saesang.

11:11 On Universe Time | Tapas

[PKLucky]

Hope you guys give my comic a chance! I'm new to Tapas, and this is the first webcomic I've ever published here. Though it is a fan-comic, you don't need to know everything about the characters to enjoy it! Plus, it's getting a new episode in a couple of days
https://tapas.io/series/Living-With-My-Fighting-Game-Mains

[GoggleGeek]

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[kbhargan]

Here's mine [](https://tapas.io/series/Bite---KBHargan)