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Sep 2023

I am working on a new image for a possible FB ad. It's not finished, but what do you think thus far?

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I know I'm not an ad expert or a facebook user, but if I saw this I wouldn't know what exactly its selling me.
Maybe include a logo or graphic in a corner saying some thing like "Read on [blank]" or "Available on [blank]"

Also it looks to be AI generated. There's a lot of uncanny elements that make the ad seem sketchy

I apologize if I come across as too mean

You're not mean at all. Like I said, it's unfinished. I have logos and such I'm going to add to it. And funnily enough, it's not entirely AI. The only AI bit is the editing done on the female model.

I like the colors and style of the background drawing.
The character in front looks disconnected from the background.
The font could be better and I would try out how it looks when
the text is not centered