Quick feedback for Covers by a graphic designer

1SickPuppy 2022-09-14 05:36:24 UTC #33

It looks much better, although you could make some adjustments to make the logo a bit bigger. This is a very rough example.

It is ok if the logo overlaps the image a little in some places.

bulgariansumo 2022-09-14 05:40:36 UTC #34

Oh, thank you! That's really good to know. I was worried that the logo overlapping the rest would make it look bad. Your advice has been very helpful. I really appreciate it!

1SickPuppy 2022-09-14 05:43:29 UTC #35

This looks definitely better! I was thinking something like this (very rough edit):

Don't be afraid to cut off stuff in covers. The feeling stays the same, but you have a more dynamic result

1SickPuppy 2022-09-14 05:46:39 UTC #36

Your cover looks very dynamic! Consider giving you title more prominence (very rough edit).

1SickPuppy 2022-09-14 05:48:07 UTC #37

I like this! What I would do is bring the hand over the letters, and make them a bit smaller to give them some space from the sides. Well done!

1SickPuppy 2022-09-14 05:50:50 UTC #38

A serif font will look better with this kind of illustrations. You can also consider braking up the words, making one bigger and the other smaller with more spacing between the letters.

1SickPuppy 2022-09-14 05:56:22 UTC #39

I like the Twenty Names cover, I don't think I would change something (except maybe the shadow effect).

I would give the Turn it Up cover a bit more depth by bringing the characters closer to the edges, and making the middle one even bigger.

Cool stuff!

ccmatta 2022-09-14 06:33:07 UTC #40

ooooh, i see. that totally looks way cooler! I'm gonna try something like that! Thank you so much!

Hipiticus 2022-09-14 23:16:03 UTC #41

How about now?
I thought I'd add "the" while I was at it

1SickPuppy 2022-09-15 06:48:54 UTC #43

I was thinking something more like this

The title looks good big, but not so close to the edges.

Hipiticus 2022-09-15 22:17:29 UTC #44

3rd times the charm, how about now?

AnonymousHouseCat 2022-09-15 23:06:01 UTC #45

Thanks so much for doing this! This has been my cover for about a year now, and some things I'm already aware of are the resolution isn't as great as I'd like, and the anatomy could use some work. The story is about a 30-something woman who is trying to run an independent grim reaper business (The Sapphire Bay Reaper Company) in a bad economy with limited funding. Meanwhile, her worst employee (gold hair) finds, and tries to help a lost girl (brown hair) who appears dead but insists otherwise.

N1ghtm4r3 2022-09-15 23:49:15 UTC #46

hmm sounds fun here are a few from my series ... covers are from chapters 1,2,7,8,9,10 in that order

1SickPuppy 2022-09-16 05:46:29 UTC #48

Your art and compositions look cool! But your logo is lost in the mayhem You could consider making it bigger, even if that means it will occupy the top forth of your page.

1SickPuppy 2022-09-16 05:54:14 UTC #49

Cool design! I would make things a little more prominent like so.

Don't be afraid to take things a bit off the edges, most of the times you will get a much more dynamic outcome!

Keep up the good work!

1SickPuppy 2022-09-16 06:04:01 UTC #50

I like the addition of the word The, but the word Paw is crushed under the paw! You could also try something like this

N1ghtm4r3 2022-09-16 22:11:08 UTC #51

hmm i might try that

Chocolate 2022-09-16 22:27:21 UTC #52

My comic is about a boy born from a volcano rock and just journey to the ice city to control his fire powers.

Hipiticus 2022-09-16 23:48:49 UTC #53

It makes sense doing it that way, how about now?

1SickPuppy 2022-09-17 05:07:32 UTC #55

This looks cool, but is iit your comic's cover?