Well, I may be a little against the grain here cuz I'm already thinking of changing my cover, cuz I don't like it, but I don't know why I don't like it, so that's why I'm here. I want to know from an expert why it doesn't work, cuz I don't undestand xD My followers found it cute, but that's not enough, so yeah. My inspiration were those photos from photobooth that couples take together you know?
I know the title is totally wrong, I realized midway that I had no where to put it and I found a white space to put it xD so bad bad work therre. Also, I use this font for the title since the begining, but maybe that's not good? Should it be more bold? I don't know, I wanted something delicated, as the themes I talk about are.
Now about the comic, it's a BL/slice of life/drama about a boy that has depression and a boy that has problems at home, they kinda found home and hapiness in eachother in a way and the comic talk about the struggles with mental health in tennagers, but I wanted to focus the cover on the relationship of the boys other than the drama aspects.
I'm thinking of making a new cover with a illustration like this one though, I don't know if i'll be this one or not, but if you can give me some tips on what to make better I'd be awesome too, but don't feel like you need to, as you offered just the feedback to the current one xD