Thanks for the feedback! To answer your question, sort-of! The source material is a game I made back in 2002ish, so it's a retelling of a story I came up with when I was 13 (and it made no sense, because I was 13). I revamped the story quite a bit and moved it over to comic book format. Glad you liked it!
We already read each others' but I like that you do this 
Still enjoying your comic. Good update this week Mine goes up on Monday
Posting mine here for others to see though
Woah, your comic is so cool, the action is well made, i like your style and the backgrounds are awesome too. I couldn't stop reading, what i saw about the script is great too, the twists of that first fight are satisfying to see.
Anyway, here is my comic, i hope you enjoy it ^^
(sorry if my english is bad, english is not my native language)
Dude, that's extra awesome then! Good for you! I actually made my story when I was that age too(it's obviously been updated and aged up since then as well). Best of luck to ya and I'm interested to see where the story goes!
Yep, already subbed and liked all yours! Hopefully you'll get some more from this thread that will do the same! And thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed my update, looking forward to seeing yours as well!
Hello! I've just finished reading your webtoon, you earned a subscriber because I'm curious about what will happen next lol. Making people want to learn more about the "rules" of your universe and its species is clearly something you do right, as you have a bunch of subscribers and patrons. Seeing oppressed individuals stand up to trash and winning is something satisfying to see lol. The style somehow reminded me of Saga, if you've heard of that comic book series, and the backgrounds remind me of classic dark, action novels- Batman, Joker etc. It looks professional.
Now,to add the bad, the white stream lines used to show the action seemed overused, panel after panel, sometimes even seeming to cover the characters too much. Alternating with other ways to convey movement would be better in my eyes, maybe just relying on the direction of bodies, hair, and her blue power one panel then using lines the next. That is just nitpicking, frankly. The episodes are long enough, I think on LINE Webtoon to get featured 'n stuff they want creators that update every week, but that is hard alone and especially if you don't use unedited 3D backgrounds.
Also, I frankly think you should ignore opinions you don't like, sometimes doing what the audience wants should be less important than you having fun, for the sake of your mind, otherwise you won't want to go forward if you think you have no creative freedom anymore I'm saying this because I'm a beginner and I don't know why I am giving feedback to someone clearly more experienced lol
If you wanna check what I did, here's the link:
https://tapas.io/series/Alandala-Comics
I suggest the last episodes, I'm not proud of the first ones anymore lol
Thank you so much for your review. I definitely will work more on improving my art skills. You mention liking all my episodes but It didn't show up. It might be a glitch or something. Having said that, I really appreciate the time you took to read my comic and give valuable feedback.
My comic is also a vertical scroll format comic, so Ill give you some advice that was also given to me.
Your panels need a lot more space between them. (I also struggled with this) Some can be closer than others depending on the pacing but the comic right now feels really rushed. I was told that the rule of thumb was to put a space equal to the size of the next panel for standard pacing.
I think the action lines would be less distracting if your panels were more evenly spaced, so Im not sure if I agree with others who said they were over done. (I like action lines myself 🤷♀️)
The scene is dark and at night but your gutters are white. It actually makes it hard for my eyes to focus on the panels due to the contrast. I suggest playing with the gutters and making them a darker color (or just black) to see how that effects the scene. I've seen people do night skies, fades, clouds or flat colors. Something kinda interesting about vertical comics to think about.
I really like the story. Its easy to follow, sets up the characters well and even the "generic bad guys" aren't boring. The panels are easy to follow and the action is excellent and to the point. The backgrounds and art are very nice, some of the nicest art I've seen in canvas. I like the very different set of powers the siblings have. Super cool!
I'd love to get some feedback on my own webtoon (its also on tapas if thats easier) if you are interested 
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Okay, I just read all five episodes you have so far for Tenacity. First of all, your art is absolutely fantastic! I love the detail on your backgrounds, I love your usage of speedlines, and I love your character designs.
As such, I liked all your episodes :DD I also subscribed and am definitely looking forward to your next update. I also left a comment on the latest episode.
Being a Superhero Canvas Creator myself, I enjoyed your fight scene the most. I like the way you drew the panels, and had the characters acting out the fight properly! I did think that for some of the panels, you could have gone for more dramatic angles, but that's a personal preference of mine.
I am also super curious on what Nats are, how mutations work in your story's universe, and who the characters they mentioned are. You did a great job setting up the lore and I can't wait for the next episode!
My comic is called The Remarkable Rabbit Boy on Webtoons. It recently got Number 1 in the Superhero category of Canvas Top 30, and as a result got itself bombed with a bunch of random 1 star ratings. I'd appreciate it if you could give it a read, see what you think I can improve, and maybe subscribe and rate. Only if you want to though, no pressure 
Cheers!! You have a great comic, and I'm not just saying that to be nice. I'm really happy I got to read it!
I read and subbed your series! I really enjoyed it! The art is absolutely gorgeous; I could easily see picking your comic up at an actual comic shop. I can't wait to see more. I really enjoy your characters 
The fight scenes are very cool and their powers are interesting!
It's got a slow following start so far, but hey progress is progress!@pepasmaga2
Thank you, that's really kind of you to say! I'm glad you liked it! And no worries, the English is a little off but it's no big deal! I was never confused by it or couldn't tell what you meant. Props to you though, you're much better at your second language than I am at mine! I also enjoyed the art style for yours and found your story pleasant to read and easy to follow! Great work! I made sure to like everything and give you a sub!
@eldorainicorn12
Thanks for the read and feedback! I haven't heard of saga, but I'll definitely go check them out! And thank you so much for saying it looks professional! It definitely still needs some tweaks(the action lines being used too much is a good observation. Usually when several people point out the same thing there is definitely some truth to it). And yeah, pushing the updates out any faster would be possible, but I feel like the shorter updates would be a less pleasant reading experience that cuts off in weird places compared to longer updates that end on a story beat. And don't worry about being less experienced and giving me feedback. Feedback is feedback and I value it from any other artist Also, I just read/liked all of yours and I have to say, I enjoyed them! I like your sense of humor and you're quite good at building tension to land the jokes(especially your latest ones). Great work! I made sure to sub too!
@dsptss78
No problem! I'm not sure what's to tell ya about the likes, all the hearts are red on my end on every episode. I certainly wouldn't have taken the time to say I liked them all if I didn't actually do it. lol
@sarrowsmith10
Thanks for taking the time to give it a read/the feedback! I can probably get a little more space in between my panels, but not much. Webtoon has a 20MB limit to uploads(maybe it's more outside of canvas, but for me, that's the limit). Most of my uploads end up being 17-19MB since they're bigger chunks of story with lots of panels. But yeah, I can probably play around with it and see what I can do to get more space in there while also staying under the 20MB cap. That's a fair call about the gutters too, I might even go fix those now since it'd be an easy edit. Glad you enjoyed the art/story though! I just read/liked all of yours(Webtoon is fine, I have accounts on both platforms). I'd say first off, the art is great! There were a couple art/formatting things I would have critiqued you on early on, but literally every nit pick I had was solved by later episodes. I was a little confused by the sequence about Karen(I didn't catch that that was a flashback/in the past until Tory mentions later that it happened a year ago). I think story wise things moved a little too quickly and that I wasn't getting enough time to bond with the characters but that problem felt like less and less the longer the episodes went on. Overall amazing work, you definitely earned a sub from me and I can't wait to see how this plays out! Since Webtoon has that 10 star rating system, I made sure to leave you a 10 to help boost that as well(you really deserve the 10 too, it's not just about the boost).
Hullo, I've just read your comic and have to say I'm impressed by the quality. Especially the level of immersion you've achieved, fuel for my neurons! I like the atmosphere and look forward to the larger world of yours. What especially interests me is what this aledged threat was and how deep this hate for them is. Also you really shown typical human behavior, after the threat ended these, well, heroes were turned into a subclass. Backstabbing of highest class. Or is there like areason why they are shunned? I could also imagine a case, where part of the war veterans turned into terrorists taliban style. Causing a painful egg-chicken sitiation -> do they act out because they're misstreated or are they mistreated because they act out... When you actually show your lore I will sureley feast on it :D.
Regarding the scenery I have a question. Is it a 3D model or do you just plop down textures into ruler-drawn lineart? I'm still undecided how I should do backgrounds in my future projects and would like to hear what other people do.
So if you have time could you look at my project, ToTC? I'm always searching for more feedback and would kindly ask if you could give me some.
@arayakim
Thanks for taking the time to give it a read and provide some feedback! So glad you liked it enough to sub as well, that's awesome! I put a lot of time into the "rules" and world building of the universe so I'm glad it's caught your interest so far! That's great that you got on Canvas top 30, good for you! I'm sorry to hear you got tanked by bad reviews(I honestly don't like having a rating system on webtoon that's just stars, I feel like you should have to write WHY you rate how you do so people can file through and find rational, fair reasons that go behind the ratings and separate fair criticism from people just being trolls) I just threw another 10 your way, hope it helps a little! I likes/read all of what you have so far and I'd say it quite well done! A mild criticism I could offer is that sometimes it feels like there's too many speech bubbles per panel. It might help to stretch out the dialogue over more poses/panels or to break things up with slower moments, maybe an establishing shot or two. I really like the variety of your character designs (foxline's is my favorite) and your action sequences are incredibly well done! Clear actions, great impacts, easy to follow! I gave it a sub to keep up with what happens next!
@sarahmcsquish
Thank you so much for the sub! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and that really makes my day to read what you said about feeling like you could pick it up in a comic shop! I just read/liked all of yours, nice work so far! I like the variety of characters(both personality and design wise)and that you told a little of each of their backstories before they all came together! It didn't feel like a slow start to me at all, I like it when writers/artists give you a minute to get attached to the characters before diving into the thick of the story! Keep it up!
@DukeOfOool
Dude, I love your reaction. That's awesome that you're looking so deep into the lore of mine already! I put a ton of work into the rule systems, lore, and general world building so that really makes my day to see people getting interested in it! You bring up some great points, all that I plan to address as the story goes on! Mainly the backgrounds are drawn from scratch(I use Autodesk sketchbook's perspective ruler tools, as these save A TON of time and make it easier) with photo textures added in via perspective warp tools. Sometimes I'll take photos tweak the hell out of them and blur them for things that are really far into the background. I made a lot of custom brushes for certain textures too. No 3D models, simply because I've never learned any of the programs that make using them easy. I know clip studio paint has TONS of free 3D assets, I just haven't taken the time to figure out how to use them yet. Hopefully some of that info is useful to ya! I'm happy to give you feedback too. I just got done liking/reading it all. The art is really stellar with a dark atmosphere that fits the story well, great use of color and textures, and is overall the biggest highlight for me, very well done! I feel like a slight nitpick would be that it could benefit a lot from more onomatopoeias. Visually you're establishing the experience well but what a reader "hears" is part of the experience too. I see you starting to use them by episode 6 though so that's good! I don't know that I'm understanding all of what's happening early on(this might be a little too deep and poetic for my brain but I understood more the longer I read), but this is overall really well done. It's surreal to read and really feels like fine art to me. I was also really interested in your Q&A to get a deeper understanding of how your brain works/your process. Really interesting stuff man!
Thank you so much for doing that when you didn't have to! That was really kind of you.
I'm really glad that you liked my action sequences, I have a blast drawing them and it gives me a nice feeling of validation when readers like them. I'm also really happy that you like the character designs, especially Foxline. She is very fun to draw too
You're absolutely right about speech bubbles being a little too crowded, I'll definitely work on better spacing for the dialogue, and maybe add a few establishing shots too like you suggest.
Thank you for the sub and the feedback, and especially the rate! Every rate helps a lot, so I'm super grateful!!
Firstly, your welcome! I love to analyse stories and am also a little extra in this regard. I have made it my goal to steal together the best bits and pieces from everywhere :D.
Regarding background process, I'll remember to create more texture brushes and use perspective warp.
And thanks for the feedback. I don't know if I will add more onomatopieias to 4. Prince because I have nearly finished all episodes. (Originaly I also feared it would disrupt the atmosphere if I used them to much.) But I will surely see to it and try to use them more in the the 'sequel', the next story, Two Knights. And don't worry about understanding. Everything important will be integrated into the story somehow. Eveything else is here for speculation and fodder for the readers imagination. You surely have seen the many great comments under each episode, especially Ramonkeys and currently Killian Rains. Woah, I do in fact copy paste them into my lore collection. I will surely write your comic some rhyme or text too.
Have you considered breaking the episodes into more episodes? That way you get your panels and the spacing, just with more episodes?
@arayakim
No problem, always happy to help boost a fellow creator! I can tell you put a lot of time into yours too so you definitely earned/deserve it!
@DukeOfOool
You're welcome! The brushes/warp tools will save TONS of time in the long run, they're really worth it. The onomatopoeias were a light suggestion but I feel like your stuff works with or without them because it's so surreal. And yeah, I did see that you had quite a few people leaving some great comments. Good for you for getting so many people that are really into your work, that's the dream! ^-^
@sarrowsmith10
I have. I have 3 chapters done and split them in as many ways as I could to see how it would work overall. My story's just so long that it doesn't work as well chopped up too small. I can't always find good ways to break that don't kill a joke or break up a conversation in an unnatural place. I did actually go back into my comic files last night and added as much space as I could(within that darn 20MB limit) to beef up the gutters a bit. I also agreed with you that making the gutters dark for night sequences would be a good idea so I did that well. So it's still not perfect by any means, but it's at least a step in the right direction I'd say. ^-^"
