Here's my contribution for the Read for Read:
@julipow for Essence of Life: I thought your book was well written as it reads like a song or poem, which matches the style of the biblical story-line nicely. Feedback: Scene description is Heaven a kingdom of clouds like on television shows or is it an open field with modest structures like in the Bible? Is Hell a place of fire like on television or is it a place of fear and darkness like in the bible? As examples. Thank you for your read and feedback.
@dsptss78 for Dan: My opinion on your comic is that it had nice art and character design/emotions. However, I think you could improve your story-line by adding more drama between the action and violence.
@HopefulAttempt for When Souls Awaken: My thoughts on your novel is that you have great description, characters, and emotions for your story-line. I really enjoyed how the story began with small stories that make one big adventure. The only feedback I have for you is minimal. I saw that in the description for certain chapters you were promoting the YouTube and Twitch channels for your book when doing so you can include links in the description of those chapters for people to copy and past to find those promotional sites more easily. Keep up the great work and I'm excited to read more!
@Tinkerton for Tragic: I found your story to be relatable as I too was an outcast in school and only had a few friends and that was also in a small town. Beck's narration was also well done as I often feel how she thinks. The only feedback I have for you is that there were a few typos, which is an easy fix just proofread before publishing. Other than that, I am excited to see what happens next in your story-line with each of your characters. Thank you for reading and subscribing to my work as well.
@WitheredSage for Rising Fire: In your book you describe your supernatural world and powers in an easy to understand way. The wording in your story was also well-done. The only feedback I have for you is that there were a few typos, which is an easy fix just proofread before publishing.
Here is my comic if you want to read my work.
Thank you all.