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I am not gonna lie, that was so cool. The art style reminded me of early Spider-Man comics. The story, the clean artwork was a treat to read. Looking forward to read more! Loved the chapter. My favourite was his internal monologues.

Just gone through yours - At first I thought it's an Isekai, but in the second episode - you showed the original timeline, And it hooked me to read more. BTW are you going to write more about the original timeline?

I am invested!!!! I couldn’t literally imagine every character and the cloths, the atmosphere just by reading the novel. Although it was long, it was not boring. You held the tension till the chapter ended. I love how detailed you have written everything.

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I like the 2nd chapter much better than the 1st in terms of clear dialogues and better colour tone. The first chapter was intriguing, not gonna lie. I liked how you didn’t reveal much about the plot but still kept the scene intriguing.

It’s for someone else, sorry.

As for your first chapter I liked how you used images while writing. And I kid you not, Darius is actually the name I picked for my character as well 🥲:joy:

I love the conversation between Mark and Darius.
Mark is my favourite character.

about yours:the setting seems quite interesting, the draws looks rough but nothing that couldn't be fixed. I can't say much for the story, it just started , but it seems nice

i love the art style! very detailed. looks like it must have taken a long time, aha. curious to see more; subbed : ) @JJay

chapter one isnt done yet but theres only three more pages so i'll send anyways! its a more traditional comic type style, with individual pages, rather than the webtoons scroll format