Hello, I will be reviewing @United_cuttles series "The Megalith Symphony."
Your character design is really cute! if you're consistent, they could be really compelling.
It seems like your story is still in its early stages. Right now, there isn't much to hook most readers. You know, the story hook that causes readers to go "Oooooh, well. What happens next?" I would advice to get to that point soon. It'll definitely help with sub count.
In your story description, you typed "The" twice. Please fix (can't help but be bothered).
My series: The Middle Crowd
Be harsh!! I want to hear stuff I can improve upon, whether it's something that confused you, or if there's something you want from the series!
(also, pardon the frequent posting. I'm trying to be active on these forums -_-;)