Hey! I'd love a review! It's a dark fantasy that starts off with a sacrifice.
I had enough time to do a brief overlook of everyone here so far so:
@An_Alias I'm not great at critiques, but I really like the title, and you can get a pretty good feel for the characters right out the gate. Beyond that your pacing and flow is good, and your descriptions do really well in setting the overall tone.
@Pony_wearing_a_hat I really love your character interactions, and I find it easy to grow attached to them. The way the characters' backstories end so far does a good job trauma bonding them. Overall, I love the humor in it!
@Nin The pacing of your story is good, and the motives and ambitions are clear. The story really does feel like the fighter's diary as well, and overall it's interesting!