Eh why not? Here's TSFI if you wanna check it out. Please don't sub unless you really like it. I really don't want dead subs.
There's some typos like "Belies" instead of "Relies". Coloring is a bit off. It's a bit difficult telling where things start and things end (for me at least). I think you should get more advice from someone more skilled though?
You're a little too exposition happy. Throwing a bunch of stuff at the reader. Like "Snow Season" and "Bloom Season" and then giving us a meter. When doing stuff like that you gotta drip feed the audience on information. Make them want to learn more. Dialogue's a bit clunky. As I said before, try to keep things short and sweet. I think you should focus more on show and and less on tell.
Anyway those are my thoughts on the first episode (I'm going to be upfront, I don't think I'm going to read all of the episodes if the first one is this long... plus it seems like you'll only be looking at my first chapter anyway so it'd only be fair).
I don't have much to say about the story? You have a setup which is good, but I think it can benefit even more if you just cut to the action (the boy's powers activating) and cut to the Grandma staring at the cemetery, only for her to see her grandson. Something like that. Get readers hooked.