In my opinion, yours is one of the most interesting and well drawn comics on Tapas. The cover and the first page both showcase spectacular art, and the opening scene is intriguing and contains just the right amount of world info and hints of what's to come. It's both strange and familiar, especially the part where the Traveller explains his name. I also think it's a good thing to show the MC's homelife at an early stage. As for the art, the anatomy and expressions are flawless, the coloring looks professional and fits the tone of the story, and the backgrounds feel real.
The blue-gray color scale can feel a little oppressive after a while, but maybe it's going to be a bit like in The Wizard of Oz when she enters this other world? Also, Des seems to be a fairly introverted character, so it makes sense that she doesn't talk much, but I think it would be good if the readers could somehow get a little more insight into her way of thinking.
Here's mine, though you've seen it already: