All right, gave this a look. Writing some notes on it now. Given the setting/name scheme, I'm assuming English isn't your native language? It holds up pretty well, but there are bits that sound stilted. I'll comment more in detail once I've given it a more thorough reading. Already made notes, so you're likely up first.
Is this gag-a-day? Not something I can really comment on immediately, but I'll try to get around to this at some point. I do think there are things to be said about the genre, but I'm biased by my love of The Far Side.
Been meaning to look into that for a bit. I'll mark you for number two.
There's certainly some edge there, but I just read all you had to offer and I think I could definitely say somethings about it. I'll hit you for three.
Your art has certainly improved from the start until now. Not exactly my genre of choice, but I've worked in it before.
If I'm not dead at that point, remind me when you've reached the point you want a review at.
I'll say this right now. You've got a very good voice and tone set for what is going on prior to this latest page of yours. It is the dissonance that occurs when you shift from that narrative voice to what is happening in the now. It is a little jarring. I'll get to you proper, though I might wait for a few more pages to see if this issue is put to the wayside.
I'm sure I can find a few words.
You've got an interesting concept and I'm liking some of the designs. I'll try to get to you organically.
All right, getting tired of the quote function.
1. Zotagius.
2. Drugs & Wires.
3. Whetstone.
4. Cosmic Fish.
5. No Such Thing as Jason.
6. Various Gag-a-Day/Slice of Life that are not following a story-line.
7. U-Speed, Bomb A, I Did Love Him, Magic Girl genre; mostly because looking at them I feel there will be some overlap in thoughts.
8. Beast Bait, Bite Madness; already have some thoughts percolating on the both of them.
9. Whatever was sent to me privately because I have yet to check my inbox, but I see it there.
Ought to have some done within a week.