_Hi all, _
I have just started writing my first novel & I was wondering if someone could just read my synopsis and give me some advice, I know it is early but I'm curious what others thoughts are.
I’m done with reincarnation, this time I’ll become a different type of God.
Death does not mean the end, with technological advancements that escape the realm of reality scientists have made a new plain of existence, by a process called upload. By uploading one’s brain upon death, humans can recall all their history of being alive and are free to choose what they would like to do with their afterlife within Eden, an artificial intelligent graveyard where you choose your own world & explore as you see fit.
Within Eden you can become anything you desire from a celestial being controlling the world and its inhabitants or a peasant farmer tending to his garden, the choice is yours and if you die, you’ll simply restart and choose your next destination.
But what happens when bonds are made with the advanced AI avatars that are human in everyway, but aren't immortal, what happens to the psychological baggage of endless cycles of birth and death, how do you escape this never-ending loop.
Do you become a god, watching over your Eden alone?
Or do you simply keep restarting & hope your next world is more favorable & that the advanced AI doesn’t create another scenario where your loved ones die horrifically?
"No, not again! Eden, upload protocol decision made. I wish to try something a little different, I want to become a god again with some minor alterations.”
Thanks for reading, any input would be golden as I'm a total noob.