Share your drafts and your finalized page
Oh this is fun!
I'm using episode 8 of my comic as an example.
//I obviously couldn't fit the whole thing here, but here's about half of it for comparison. Click on them to enlarge.
Sorry didn't transulate these yet. However, as you can see, I do a quick sketch for the joke without looking for the details. Even with the text, I use short and simple sentences to give quick idea what is the joke is about. Thank you for the topic! I really like it
Interesting. I definitely wasn't expecting actual paper. Just goes to show just how much technology has really encompassed our lives... or at least mine.
Nah, believe me there is nothing better than writing on papers. Especially when you have a coffee in your hand and holding your pencil by your other hand while watching something on Netflix.
Yeah, that's definitely not me, all right. I can only draw digitally. I don't even have pencil and paper to draw with.
I also don't drink coffee.
And... I don't watch Netflix.
...
Wow, I'm your opposite.
You know, I'm not super happy with this one but since my comic is relatively new, I don't have many examples lol.
Here's a better example. Not a page but still art from my comic that is the same process ^w^
I always love to see these! I often fall into the trap of over-rendering the sketch before moiving on to lineart lol... but here's an example where i didn't totally to that!
@Kiweevil do you have a link to your comic? I could only find your instagram on your profile!
here's a sketch I shared with my comic discord (this is "second sketch," with the first being my rough thumbnail, which I don't think I have a saved copy of):
and here's the final page:
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Your drafts/sketch looks far better than your finalized page. The reason for that is the difference in the line thickness.Vary your lines to be thicker where there's less light and thinner where there is more light.-Underneath the ears for example the lines would be a lot thicker and going out from there it gets thinner.
One way to get around all your lines having the same thickness is to have your pen tool at a higher size than you have now and change the minimum size to 0%. That way you can control the thickness by how hard you press on your drawing tablet.
I usually tend to do all of my drafts for my comic on digital, and as such never save them separately from the final product.
But I've got a sketch here of Rip's room, and a final version.
Part of a page
Wow, that's really interesting. It definitely looks different in the final illustration.
So this one is like rough rough
Then the more refined rough
and here is finished with colors and everything!
I love how the bottom panels become like waves in their borders!!
My sketches are "drawing vomit" xD and the final version usually changes a lot because I get better ideas as I go.
Ahh thank you!! yes we had a lot of fun fmakeing fun panels!
