Ah, @Airgita, I love the colours across those and the lines angling to push your eye along the sequence work very well! It's crazy that you hated it for the longest before you ended up being proud of how it turned out. Usually artists work in the opposite of that, hah! It's a really solid lay of colours, though. The consistent bluish-grey across is livened up nicely with the jets of yellow.
Personally, there's actually a really old page I made around 2007-8(?) from an older series of mine with a great little layout that just came together so easily. I still really like it even with the weak art and terrible font! It looks nice, I love the colours, the joke was pretty kitschy but it's fun!
From my new comic There's No Such Thing as Jason -- I.T., I really, really enjoyed the flashback insert. In it's standard format, it mimics the composition of a previous page in which the flashback concludes. I love the rhythm of the angles across them. But in long-scroll format, it looks really sleek! The rhythm isn't there however it manages to pull focus on the shapes and the characters' perspectives (for me at least!).
