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It'd also be fun to leave feedback on each others art :smiley:

I just finished this drawing of my (in development) comic's main character Finn, for one of those "give me a number and I'll draw my OC in that clothing" memes. I think the jacket suits him very well because he is from the 80's/90's and the jacket really fits that style haha!
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Feedback is appreciated!

Here's a version without the intense colored lighting:

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Idk what kind of feedback I can really give on that one, although the jackets does throw my off a bit with all those colors xD. I like the eyes but I feel like the eye on the left is a little big in proportion to the right eye. I do love the highlights on character but the intensity in certain areas (Left and right elbow) seems a little high. 10/10 other wise :stuck_out_tongue:

I haven't really worked on a drawing in a long while (I haven't even worked on my comic for a week) but I have been working on a WIP project that I guess I could screenshot a recent image from.

You can leave feedback on this if you want but sadly I cannot change anything since that entire part is finished.

Thank you for the feedback!!

I added a version without the crazy lighting to the original post haha, I wasn't sure if I liked the intensity of it so I made both :slight_smile:

As for your drawing, I really love the way your characters look! Their proportions look great though I personally would move their eyes a bit more back and add more depth to the eye sockets, but it doesn't look wrong in the way you do it.
I also love the tree you drew, but it's very dark which makes it look a bit.. flat, in my opinion. Though I'm not sure if it might be so dark because it's supposed to be in the foreground. If that's the case, I'd try to overlap it a bit with the characters so you can see that it's supposed to be before them. In general I would add more things in the background too to create more depth in the piece, but I assume you've chosen not to for stylistic reasons which is totally okay! :smiley:

The last thing I drew is my comic's3 main characters wearing playsuits for men.
I was inspired by a "Teens react" to playsuits for men. I found the playsuits very cute and appealing so I wanted to draw it.

As for feedback on your drawing, I think you should look at your anatomy a bit more. It's not bad, it has a certain appeal, but I think his neck is very thin, like thinner than his arms thin. It makes his body look a bit large and out of proportion.

Thanks for the feedback! I realized I made his neck too thin too yeah, I'll definitely keep it in mind in the future, thanks!

Those playsuits look so cute! I really like your style! I do think the proportions look a bit like a child's body in a way, especially for the character on the right. I looked at your comic and the proportions look good in there so I think it might be because of the clothing? I'm not sure. Overall (lol :wink:) I think it looks awesome!

@barbsart I really like the colors on your character! He looks awesome!
@MidZM I love the profiles, its a nice picture!

Sorry I don't have much feedback. I'm not the best at giving it.

Here is something I'm slowly working on on my free time. I hope to find some time to animate the tail in this weekend
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Aw thank youuu <3
YEah, I probably made their heads a bit too big or something haha. And I think the belts make their torso's look shorter? Or not? Maybe I just made Logan's torso too short... Anyways I do agree something looks off :thinking:

Everything taken on its own is perfect, but when you take it as a whole, the head looks very tiny in comparaison to the body.
That may be an artistic choice of yours, and anyway the bright colors made me happy :smile:

Thank you! I've actually been told my heads look a bit small sometimes before, and even though I've now made a habit of checking if the head isn't too small proportionately, it still seems to be in the finished product and I have no idea why! In this one it might be because the jacket is so baggy.. i'm not sure. Thanks for the feedback! <3

As for the eyes, that's just how I've always drawn them, I get it from when I used to draw Naruto a lot, and Kishimoto's style puts the eyes kind of close to the front of the face (Though maybe not as close as mine). As for detail and the tree, my piece is actually part of an animation, so there is more detail on the BG, just not as much as normally would be in a piece like this :stuck_out_tongue:, and the characters actually walk behind the tree in the animated version.

But thanks :slight_smile:

From what I remember, the head's width should be a third of the shoulders' width, and it's length a third of the torso lenght. This kind of tricks might help you !

That looks amazing, I love the contrast and the way you paint! I'd personally add more of that blue highlight into the piece and maybe use a complimentary color in the background or for some other details to make it look more interesting! :slight_smile:

ive been in a real art funk lately, and only really drawn in my sketchbook, but heres the latest digital drawing ive done (besides comic)


its a babby version of balor, my mc in There was a War

as for your drawing... the movement is nice, and so is the form and colour harmony. i think the head is a little too small? particularly for how long the neck is. i find a small head makes the character distant and harder to connect to emotionally, harder to express with, so its best to avoid it. besides that, it looks really good!

My most recent image is just a vectorized decal for my comic All Broken Gods

As for your drawing the head is extremely tiny and the neck is very long. Maybe just rescale the head up so it looks proportionate to the body. I'm sure you can just google search human male and compare it. The eyes are looking in two different directions, i'm sure that's also an easy fix, just try to move the left one to line up with the right's view point. The one without intense colored lighting looks better.