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May 2020

Thanks for sharing! Subscribed.

Read some pages. I really liked the names of the chapters, you thought them out real well and that's something not everyone does!

Please read some page of other people to keep this spirit alive!

@Animatikat I had indeed read you already, so I may do a quick review of this first episode. I love the art and writing is good and funny, but I'm gonna give you a little suggestion if I may: write the letters a bit bigger. No need to change to digital letters, yours have way more charisma, but with this resolution it may be a bit difficult to read some sentences. And I'm gonna repeat myself a bit, but really, great art and funny, will keep reading.

Thank you so much! I appreciate your feedback! I heard somewhere once that you should make typography a part of the art, and with that mindset, I've really been thinking about how to do just that.

Here's mine :slight_smile:
Gonna sub the ones posted here , they seem really cool

Hope you guys do the same and enjoy my webtoon :smiley:

From the start is is clear to me that you work hard, oh my, you have written a lot already. As some quick feedback reading the first two pages, I would maybe suggest you try to get an artist to make you some art for your cover or maybe some of your pages or banner, the text and action is to me very "shonen" like and that may attract some public!

Keep on writing!

Thanks for the feedback, I've been thinking about doing that, but I wanted to see how the series did without going all in on everything.

I like the imagery, art style, and story telling in your project. Especially the art style is very distinctive and carry the vibe well. Haven't done full reading but I like the masked figure.

I hope you don't mind with novel (don't worry it's newly posted, so only a little reading required)

Thanks for your kind words! I liked your prologue and first part by now and it is really intriguing. I like it, writing most of all: descriptive, beautiful and eerie. Dates and places confuse me, which I like, cause means that I will have to learn more abour that world of yours.

Hi I already subscribe yours! Your art style is great, here is mine but I only post it on webtoons version sorry.

I hope someone that read this could give me some honest review since this is my first webtoon. I need to improve myself :smile:

That's fine, subscribed in Webtoon! Visual narrative is good and you manage to merge well two different styles, with those cute chibi-like drawings to tell half of the story, I like it.

I think the first impression is really good: dark atmosphere and nice drawings. You start by showing off a lot of really well drawn background. But I have two suggestions that I think would really help your comic right off:

  • First would be bigger letters. Right now it is difficult to read and I think you should check if your letters are legible.

  • Second: I believe your comic would also be better if you make two separate comics, one for English and one for Spanish. If you continue like this, people will need to continuously skip a page each time and that can be really tiresome.