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May 2020

Hi I already subscribe yours! Your art style is great, here is mine but I only post it on webtoons version sorry.

I hope someone that read this could give me some honest review since this is my first webtoon. I need to improve myself :smile:

That's fine, subscribed in Webtoon! Visual narrative is good and you manage to merge well two different styles, with those cute chibi-like drawings to tell half of the story, I like it.

I think the first impression is really good: dark atmosphere and nice drawings. You start by showing off a lot of really well drawn background. But I have two suggestions that I think would really help your comic right off:

  • First would be bigger letters. Right now it is difficult to read and I think you should check if your letters are legible.

  • Second: I believe your comic would also be better if you make two separate comics, one for English and one for Spanish. If you continue like this, people will need to continuously skip a page each time and that can be really tiresome.

I love the art style in your comic , Just subbed , here is mine it is a small slice of life comic. Any feedback is helpful
(I can't get the hyperlink to work for some reason)

Here is mine! It is called Veraque and it takes place in a world where your ethnicity dictates the type of superpower you are born with. I started it a couple of months ago and the next update is coming Saturday June 6th! Genres: Fantasy, Superhero, Psychological, Action/Adventure.

Pages read, comics subscribed!

@ThreeeTreees you need to add "/info" at the end of your normal link now since the update.

@plitzbergmargio Had already subscribed from another thread, really like your style.

7 months later

Will do!

Here you are mine!

Hello...
here is mine... hope you like my fantasy novel... :slight_smile:

Please feel free to check out my webcomic Peacemaker Chronicles (2020)! your thoughts and critiques as would be greatly appreciated! If you like scifi, Super heroes, comedy, action, subtle world building, character driven stories, different perspectives, a bit of a dark edge and monsters then this might be the series for you!
And see the trailer for the latest episode!

I subbed/ commented! I really like you art style! My comic is very different, more cute less horror, but I think it's also a unique art style. Check it out if you want! I really appreciate any and all engagement!

https://tapas.io/series/Dragonwood1

6 months later

Idk if fanfic novel are allowed, but u guys can read if you want

About to sun and like and read!