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May 2020

That's fine, subscribed in Webtoon! Visual narrative is good and you manage to merge well two different styles, with those cute chibi-like drawings to tell half of the story, I like it.

I think the first impression is really good: dark atmosphere and nice drawings. You start by showing off a lot of really well drawn background. But I have two suggestions that I think would really help your comic right off:

  • First would be bigger letters. Right now it is difficult to read and I think you should check if your letters are legible.

  • Second: I believe your comic would also be better if you make two separate comics, one for English and one for Spanish. If you continue like this, people will need to continuously skip a page each time and that can be really tiresome.

I love the art style in your comic , Just subbed , here is mine it is a small slice of life comic. Any feedback is helpful
(I can't get the hyperlink to work for some reason)

Here is mine! It is called Veraque and it takes place in a world where your ethnicity dictates the type of superpower you are born with. I started it a couple of months ago and the next update is coming Saturday June 6th! Genres: Fantasy, Superhero, Psychological, Action/Adventure.

Pages read, comics subscribed!

@ThreeeTreees you need to add "/info" at the end of your normal link now since the update.

@plitzbergmargio Had already subscribed from another thread, really like your style.

7 months later

Will do!

Here you are mine!

Hello...
here is mine... hope you like my fantasy novel... :slight_smile:

Please feel free to check out my webcomic Peacemaker Chronicles (2020)! your thoughts and critiques as would be greatly appreciated! If you like scifi, Super heroes, comedy, action, subtle world building, character driven stories, different perspectives, a bit of a dark edge and monsters then this might be the series for you!
And see the trailer for the latest episode!

I subbed/ commented! I really like you art style! My comic is very different, more cute less horror, but I think it's also a unique art style. Check it out if you want! I really appreciate any and all engagement!

https://tapas.io/series/Dragonwood1

6 months later

Idk if fanfic novel are allowed, but u guys can read if you want

About to sun and like and read!

Hi!
That's so good of you :slight_smile:
Read yours, art and story telling is powerful :grin:
Here's mine, check it out :grin:


hi @Ramonkey I subbed, your layout and art style is awesome. I like the creepy fantasy folktale theme of your work! Keep it up!

will sub back to anyone who subs me

At face value, mines is a mix of survival horror x superhero but as the plot builds there's lots of dark fantasy stuff that pops up. Frequencies is a major element in the story too.

I'm usually inspired by cosmic horror and ancient European & East Indian folklore & mysticism

It was based on a video game Idea (survival horror x brawler) where the player hears a mysterious Hum one
night and becomes the carrier of a virus that instantly transforms others into zombie-like monsters.
The more infected (5, 10, 15, 20) they would combine to form larger and deadlier monsters.
It also becomes a balancing act when trying to rescue but not infect loved ones / survivors.
Another major side effect after hearing the Hum is that the player gains the ability to control the states Liquid, Solid and Gas.

Thanks for the opportunity :smiley: