@mugenotasu Your webcomic is beautiful, with suggestive and intriguing imagery! You're doing great work with the colors: there's a twilight quality to the lighting that creates a very special mood. You grab the reader's attention fairly early on with unexplained, brutal occurrences. I don't really know what to criticize. At this stage in the narrative, I think the characters need to be more thoroughly introduced fairly soon, so that readers can get to know them. So far, the reader's interest is kept up by the art and the mystery aspects of the story, but in order to create long-term engagement for a story, I think most readers need to be invested in the characters from an early stage. Everything I've seen so far is great though, in regards to both story and art. Here's my comic, a sci-fi adventure story: https://tapas.io/series/Carlas-Adventures.
