so i’m not a big fantasy person but i enjoyed your comic so far!
art is fantastic, super atmospheric, great coloring
the font put me off a bit, the boxes felt like they were mimicking a manga style which is fine but felt unnecessary here; i believe they’re often vertical in manga because the text is written top to bottom but when you’re writing a comic in english (over translating one) that’s not completely necessary. not sure why the text was also in box format.
the font didn’t compliment th story too well, it felt too bubbly and the changes in size put me off.
last point about the speech is that it’s often spaced in a way that makes the reading difficult. i.e.
“Indeed I’m aware
of it all, so
..
enlighten me”
might work better if it was spaced like so;
“Indeed,
I’m aware of it all
so...
enlighten me”
essentially, work the spaces between the text to fit the pacing of the reading.
overall: great art, intriguing story, maybe look into working with a letterer
wreck me