@yuichan @amberberry @zinx Thanks so much~ I'll read yours too.
I know I have a lot of long sentences and my style isn't really the short and snappy style that a lot of people online like, but I... sort of like it that way? Please don't think I'm stupid and I can't take criticism, I just... do actually like it that way....
I do think I could make it more... engaging, though. I don't know. I'd need to really get in depth about it with someone, it's not an issue that can be settled out in a comment-critique sort of thing, like the internet does.
I just... don't know. I'm too stressed to think about it right now, but I will.