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@toadsteroven I think I don't understand the joke >.< what do feminists have to do with this guy getting punched in the face? I might not be the target audience for this kind of humor haha. I think your expressions do a good job of conveying your character's personalities. I think reviewing some proportions tutorials would really help take your art to the next level! Here's one from Nsio, who does a tooonnn of really helpful tutorials. Keep up the good work ^.^


Here's the latest page of Reus

@Cielle I really like the expressions of the girl (and breaking the 4th wall with the bubbles comment!) I really like the use of color of the speech bubbles to differentiate the characters. My only comment is the lack of the speech tails in the first few panels. Though I understand who is talking, I am curious as to why they are present in the final panels (but not the first 3?) Good job all around smile


Issue 1, Page 7 of The Pale

Oh gosh the adventure with the horse-monster continues! I like the paneling, it works well! And the use of grays really evoke the feelings you're trying to work with, good job!!

Here's the most recent from Cosmic Fish! (it even has a little tune and e'rything)

I'm also working on another comic on the side which thank goodness it doesn't take me as long to work with so it should be up soon OTL

@AffectedMind There's no dialogue on this page so it's kinda more of showing than telling. The black and white is neatly done and the lines are clean. I also use those beams on the backgrounds specially when one of my characters realizes something all of a sudden.XD Very nice page. ^u^


Here's the latest page of U-Speed. smile

@HitoriEdo Thanks dude! Glad you like it. Yeah these were done almost 8 years ago when I first started been serious about doing comics. The art, layout and text all improve over time smile I promise LOL!!! If you want please feel free to check out my ongoing comic book series Super-Dud.

@Kaos_Comics oh this page looks cool, i like the way the action has been drawn and the colour. I'll have to check out the rest of it so i can learn more about what's doing on!

http://tapastic.com/episode/2406494 Here's the latest page of my comic Bajo-mano, a comic about a small town police station smile

A really dreamy atmosphere! I like the pale colors and flirty dialogue. Very well done!
Just from this page I can't believe it's about a small police station...

Here's the latest Shades Of Men. Never seen Lev talk that much!

Oh the color panel got me by surprise smile a little grammar slip up can be jarring for a native speaking reader...I think a close up on the hand of the colored panel is more approriate as the background of that panel doesnt really establish anything the previous panel hasn't already smile nice work dude smiley

This is my newest page, well I wrote it ahha, the talented AsteRiesling did that
http://artsteriesling.tumblr.com/

Well...Tell me what you think!

Thats just part of the first chapter smile
Click here and subscribe to check out our adventures!
http://tapastic.com/series/cloverlines1

Thank you smiley

Thanks for the comment @WednesdayAsh
I know out of context the colored panel could take you by surprise but only my main character is in black and white. The previous page is an establishing shot of it all.

Anything grammar-wise you would change? Can't put the finger on it!

Love your page by the way! Very colorful!

"I know I haven't been a good friend"? perhaps, it seems like yr using more words than need be there...
"Together we will have eyes everywhere" cause im assuming that hasent happened yet?

Howdy WednesdayAsh smile I read through the entirety of episode 1 of 1 for Cloverlines. I really like the ambient bubbliness of it and the colors. One thing i would watch out for though is word bubble placement, I noticed that your word bubbles cover up the faces of your characters and I want to be able to see your interesting characters you have developed!

Here's a go at my latest page for the next person Et Spiritus Divino3

Now that's some action! I remember seeing in your comic had a lot of DC inspiration when you posted on the inspiration mood board thread and I think it definitely comes through here (in a good way)! The woman looks bad ass and that atmosphere in the last panel sends me back to old DC comics.

Here's the latest page of City of Blank!
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