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I love your gaming references.
You are able to put in so much text! I don't know how I manage but I can only put a few words per bubble. I guess you didn't draw captain falcon in is second panel... I'd love to see on of you attempts on that!

Here's the latest page of Shades Of Men!

Well my most recent page is just concluding a out of control chase scene with the main protagonist getting the jump on no good robbers, Marc meets Captain Howard the captain of the Famousland Police Department. They keep bumping heads, but Howard successfully captures the criminals and and Famousland can have a peaceful night....... or do they...?

Lastest chapter here: http://tapastic.com/series/Maximum-Chaos1

I like the expressive face in panel three. Its like she saw the unspeakable.

You'll have to read the previous two pages to understand the joke here.

Life of an Aspie1


@Toad_Sta_Ovn lol Captain Falcon. I think this page does a good job of showing the important moments in this situation to make the joke really click. I also like what you're doing with the color/tones on this page. It has a clean feeling while still maintaining an interesting texture that matches the rest of the comic well. Nicely done!


Here's the latest page of Reus1. I'm not exactly 100% sold on or committed to all the sound effects here. I don't usually use them, but I thought this time they were necessary to convey the sentiment...idk though. What do you think? is it too much??
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@Cielle This page is too intense and dramatic. I love the bottom last 2 panels, where the girl was really surprised and feel so unease and the guy who is insidious plus with the zoom in of face which gives him some thrill. well im very interested what's next. smiley

and yeah here is my newest page of BOMB A2 Where joji did all his attack but still it useless to his new enemy which might be involve of missing children case in Toril Town.

@gnekomikero Nice action page. I really like those 2 top panels on the left side. They have really good intensity. And the pacing works really well too on the whole page. I'm not exactly sure what's going on in the first panel tho. It might be because I haven't seen the previous page but I can't really place where the jumping figure is going or how how they tried to attack. But really, this is good action page and I like your line work!


Fallacy1 has a wrap for chapter 5 with sad looking people.

@Squeakybat
Because you posted a cover, I went in to read a few pages of your comic... very cute upbeat feeling! I like your attention to detail in your lettering and your emphasis on the reaction of Danny (poor kid! stage fright is horrible!) Your cover art is really good too and reflects what your comic is about and is a good indicator of the overall tone. Good work!


The Pale 1.20
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Ohoho, fabulous perspective and angles here! The balance of the speech balloons to the couples at the tables is really nice, everything is weighted evenly. Super nifty way of depicting his face blindness, too, that's a simple, clear way of illustrating such a condition. I can't believe he just up and leaves, though! No 'pardon me', no excuse, not even a wave. Sompin' for real's going down, haha! She's left in the dark in the next to last panel but doesn't seem too fazed by the last one. The somber expressions are all so focused, I love it. Love it, brilliant page again, man!

Here is the most recent update, page 47, from There's No Such Thing as Jason -- I.T., we've finally gotten our kids back to Jason's dorm complex. I'd planned on it being much more detailed than it came out (underpasses are actually pretty boring, haha). Very excited for the next week of updates, yo yo!

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I like the faces of your characters. They're pretty and quite expressive!


Latest page from Strike Pup1:

Hi @atlas! You have some really great paneling work and I love your action sequences (I just started reading from the beginning). The first chapter was really great!


The Spaceverse2 just launched today! Here's a snippet of the cover...

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Thanks for the compliment! I love to draw action quite a bit, but my ability for storytelling is a bit rocky, to say the least. I hope you enjoy the rest, nonetheless! smile

Neat job on this! Your outfits and designs really set the setting for this without me even being able to tell where they really are. I like that I can already have a pretty good idea of what this world may be and look like just from the designs incorporated on this page. And nice job on that expression in the 4th panel!

Here's the latest page for City of Blank!
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Very cool use of perspective! I especially like the last four panels. It's like watching a film!


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