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Hi @atlas! You have some really great paneling work and I love your action sequences (I just started reading from the beginning). The first chapter was really great!


The Spaceverse2 just launched today! Here's a snippet of the cover...

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Thanks for the compliment! I love to draw action quite a bit, but my ability for storytelling is a bit rocky, to say the least. I hope you enjoy the rest, nonetheless! smile

Neat job on this! Your outfits and designs really set the setting for this without me even being able to tell where they really are. I like that I can already have a pretty good idea of what this world may be and look like just from the designs incorporated on this page. And nice job on that expression in the 4th panel!

Here's the latest page for City of Blank!
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Very cool use of perspective! I especially like the last four panels. It's like watching a film!


Latest from SweetGum1:

I really like the "children's book illustration" feel that you have going here with these cute animals. Very unique and makes me want to read more!

Below check out the new cover for the second chapter of Beast Bait, I got colorist Roberto Diaz to color my art on this one. What do you guys think, should I use him again? smile

@dglisson I really like the cover artwork! It looks awesome, I like the coloring, it really captures a viewer's attention. Also I like the design of the cover, it's dynamic and gives a reader a hint about the story. The only thing is dark text on dark background, it's hard to notice and hard to read.
A new page from "Summerdays"

@Toad_Sta_Ovn That looks awesome to me! I really enjoy this piece. You did a nice job. I like stuff like this and without having to look your other stuff, it gives a real nice medieval/fantasy feel to it.

Really good stuff!

@KET I like your page. It has an engaging layout and I particularly like the last panel. It kind of acts like a twist in the story, you expect one thing then get another which makes it more interesting.

Here's my latest from All Fingers And Thumbs1

I'm impressed with how varied your art seems to be from panel to panel, its kind of all over the place, but it works for what your doing.

I'm open to any question or comments.

@Babel116, Hey there! Nice seeing a new (new for me to review) comic on the thread. I really like your designs and the focus on the characters in your panels. I think you can perhaps add a bit of color to add more dramatic affects (ie a red color on panel 4 maybe). You don't have a link to a higher resolution... so it is a bit hard to head here (and there's no link in your profile, I suggest adding one there). You noticeably changed font size on panel 7... can't tell if it is a whisper. Something to watch out for in the future. Overall, really good direction and set up in tone. Good job!


The Pale 1.21