@catluckey The art is pure awesome! It surely helps people to keep on reading. Even later, when it's drawn in black and white it still looks interesting. I especially like the part on the 4th page, where the girl is flying to the next panel. Really well done! Storywise, I think 5 pages aren't enough to keep the reader watching and I feel, it's a little much world explaining for a beginning. But the way it's drawn (awesome poses and perspective!) and the fun moments in the following pages, are helping to keep readers hooked (or me at least xD ) So I'd say it's a 5/10 for the first pages and a 9/10 for the following ones.
@antimekii Well this... totally 10/10 I just read the first page (to be fair, it's a long one) and it made me hit that sub button without any further questions. I like the way you introduced the world to the reader. Even without words, it's clear, this world is in a futuristic setting. And then it directy goes into that nice action scene. Maybe I'm too hyped, but I can't see anything that would bother me.
Aaand here my story