The Monkey's Paw

Hipiticus 2022-08-19 02:46:40 UTC #1

Hi, I'd like to hear your thoughts on my webnovel, where I need to improve on my writing, heck, even if I should improve the synopsis.

Synopsis: Rumey buys a monkey's paw from a mysterious shop. He learns of the consequences that come from getting your wishes granted but decides to find ways around that. He decides to sell the wishes so someone else can deal with the consequences. Will he succeed? Will he fail brutally? Only one way to find out.

cgiverny 2022-08-20 14:29:21 UTC #2

So, I saw your request and I had something to ask. Is this story based or a reference to the short story 'The Monkey's Paw' by W. W. Jacobs?

If it is, I would suggest changing the name even if it's a retelling (or something similar). As for the synopsis, it looks good, but I'll have to read your story to see if it works for the story.

Anyway, I have a bit of time so I'll read 3-5 chapters of your book. Let me know if you want me to dm you the feedback.

Hipiticus 2022-08-20 15:07:46 UTC #3

Yeah, it's a reference to that short story. I had an idea for a different name but it doesn't work yet. dm'ing me your feedback would be great, I appreciate you helping me out

system 2022-09-19 15:07:48 UTC #4

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