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Sep 2016

It does seem hard to read... I would simplify the design to allow the letters to be seen.
A good way to check if your letters ar legible is to silhouette your design, and see if each individual letter can be made out through shape alone.

Oh, that's a great idea! I will definitely try that! Thank you!

Hi guys, it's my first time on this forum and I'm amazed at how much the Tapastic community communicates !
My situation right now is that I'm thinking about making my story a webcomic. It's a concept I've been polishing for some months now and I've drawn 4 First Pages for a contest (for a International Comics Festival, sort of a Comic-Con, in Algeria). Tthe thing is I don't want to rush things and come up with some half-baked Webcomic (Or webtoon, or whatever you like) just because it's on the web. I'm taking my time thinking the characters, the story, the background,etc.. and making sure that it's graphically good... Why, I guess "graphically OKAY" is pretty satisfying. Sooo, this is precisely the reason I'm posting on this thread, and I hope the post is relevant to the topic.
I really want some creators and readers feedback about these pages in order to be able to progress in the making of the Comic and stop the undecided and procrastinator me I so often am. So please give me your most sincere and objective opinion on it.

P.S : The text is in French cause it's a rule in the contest, I would've translated it right before posting but it's 9am and I still haven't slept so... Maybe next time ! stuck_out_tongue (Or certainly next time)
P.P.S : Can't seem to find the spoiler button to put the images in a spoiler so they don't take all that space. If someone could help me with that so I can edit the post, thank you !
P.P.S : I found out I couldn't put more than 3 Images (being a new user) in one post when I pressed the reply button so I took one out ! :s

You may want to use a more complete font, and just add the leaves & flowers to it. You want balance- a clear concise title that readers can identify with/read, while keeping elements that will make it your own. Dont put too many flowers & leaves on it though.

I have an update image that I link back to my comic for every update, it's been a placeholder image for forever and I'm not too happy with it. I made a new one today finally, how's it look in comparison? you think it'll attract more attention with the cleaner look?


I say you use both based on format or mood. They both have their cons and pros.

Just finished this for the first chapter cover of my upcoming comic (sans Title)!! I'm super happy with it, but just want some feedback to see if there's anything to improve!

13 days later

I finalized my designs for my upcoming comic a few weeks ago and I still like them, but looking back, I realize how desaturated my colors are and I worry that it might be a bit boring to look at for some. I would really appreciate some feedback!

This looks super cool. If I were to say one thing, the hooded blue character in the back is a VERY similar color to the background, and they don't stand out enough

Thank you! You do have a point. Hmm, I may just replace the character with someone else considering the direction my drafts are going.

This question will plague me forever:
Platinum, lilac and white

OR
Black, gold and blue?

Currently I have p-l-w but then i found this one and now I have doubts...

15 days later

???? wondering if this hand placement looks totally wack?? yes? no?? maybe so?

Starting up new comic and was working on the cover:

Are the colour choices decent? Is it impactful, or is there something I could fix up?

Any other general tips are appreciated

12 days later

it kinda looks a lil awkwardly tilted, but it wouldn't be especially noticeable in the larger image

11 days later

First one if you're going for a youunger audience, second one if you're going for the average consumer. Personally I like both, but prefer the second one.