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Hello, name's Fidel S. Arbolaez. I've been a member of Tapastic since August of 2015, yet never really was aware that the website has a forum page! (Who knew, right?) So yeah, I'm here because I need a bit of feedback:

I'm the writer and creator of a multi-artist comic series called, Age of the Atroximals31, which you can go and read by clicking the previous bold, italicized, blue-worded link. Generally, it's classified as Sci-Fi, but it would be more accurate if it was described as Dark Sci-Fi, as in things are going to get a little grody. Thing is that the two current episodes I have up don't seem to have reached that point yet. I want them to be easily seen by readers, but I need to know the right time when to throw up the 'NSFW' sign as the stories progress. They are both very different in tone, so I have a pretty good idea when to do it for one, but I'm not too sure about the other one.

If you want to help out by reading Age of the Atroximals31 and letting me know whether or not an episode needs a 'NSFW' by contacting me through a private conversation, that would be cool. If you also want to subscribe in the process, that would be awesome! (No pressure. Would be nice though wink )

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i like the idea of your comic i also think its dope you got different artists working on your story looking forward to some mo content

your art is awesome man... love it...
but the text kinda hard to read cause its to small... but overall it looks good...

keep up and good luck ...

Thanks, but the art for the current two stories are done by Dave Mims and Tim Pfalzgraf. Another story is currently being worked on by Jorge A. Castilla, but I'm waiting for there to be enough pages to begin posting those.

Is the text you're having the problem with for both stories or just one?

I'm very enjoy on your ART.. but i think you should change the typography dude... cause it really small and kind of boring since you don't have variation of your text... -sorry no offense..

None taken.

The wording was even smaller before posting on the web. Other than size, I'm not sure what to do to improve the typography, but I'll see what can be done.

the narrative text on both story, especially the heretic's diary... but the dialogue on second story is fine... :))

I enlarged the narrative text for The Heretic's Diary as much as I could without cluttering much of the artwork. How does it look now?

Thanks for letting me know; figured that would be the case for now, but keep reading because things are going to get a bit more violent as the stories progress.

Wow, really? I guess it takes more than that to require an NSFW label. I'll take the label down and see what happens. Thanks!