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Jun 2018

I realized that a person who reviewed my comic was right and that my lineart is laggy. Any tips, guys? I'm drawing on my phone so please no drawing tablet stuff. :blush: Thanks!

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Regardless of what medium you use, I think a big way you can improve lineart is by thinking about lineweight!

here's an example from one of your panels:

the lines sort of get thicker and thinner at random -- it seems like the individual strokes are being tapered, so each line goes from thin to thick to thin, but the thickness and thinness isn't being used to strengthen the form of what you're drawing!

There are a few different ways to do this -- here are a couple sort of slapdash examples!

  • The first one, on the left, is varying the lineweight based on light source -- lines get thicker to indicate where shadows are.

  • The second one with the two figures, on the right, is varying lineweight based on distance and to some extent detail -- the entire figure has a heavier lineweight to make it stand out, so that the figures closest to the viewer have the highest contrast, where things further away have thinner contours and don't stand out as much.

I've used both, but I tend to use the technique on the right more often -- I have a tendency to draw with a lot of detail, and using lineweight to emphasise the important /close stuff keeps my figures from getting lost. Either way, these sorts of things might be something to look into and experiment with!

i dont know what program or tools you're using, but i'd try to go for a smaller brush size, not tiny, but maybe half of what yours is set at.
i don't worry about pen pressure too much for my comic, i keep the line weight pretty consistent throughout
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a smaller brush size also allows you to put in more details, so keep that in mind

My fave style is using lineweight to indicate shadows because if you use a rather overall thick lines, less colour gets through to define things so you can utilize lineart to some pretty creative effect. There's also another one, I'm not sure if it originated from Art Noveau but it's a pretty big feature of it. I see some French manga artists use it and it looks totally sweet.

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Where you have the exterior lines of the object much bolder than the interior. Could be a good choice if you have a detail heavy style in B/W or just want to push your characters from your background in general.

Yeah, that's what I do. The thickness or thinness of my line art is a reflection of wherever the light source is.

Also, stop drawing on a phone. If you want to get better that is.

Clean, confident lines requires drawing from the elbow or shoulder, your wrist shouldn't be moving all that much. Not sure how you'd manage that on a phone.

Dude I can barely afford food what makes ya think that I can afford a tablet or a decent drawing software? I know cheap tablets but photoshop is like 5000 quetzals where I live.

Dude, you gotta count your blessings, then.
There are a some really good free softwares out there (fE KRITA, very similar to PS). I´d also - rather than one the phone suggest you draw your pages traditionally. You will not get far on a phone, that is fact. If you have access to a pc, you can either scan your drawings in or take a picture and correct them in one of the many free softwares out there.
If you know cheap tablets, see if you can safe up for one. I´ve drawn on a 50 bucks one for years and it worked perfectly fine.
Good Luck!

Yeah Guatemala is under a lot of stuff right now. I won't be surprised if the price goes up. I hope I do find a tablet though, and I will try to use the free softwares then

Clip Studio doesnt cost that much- they had a sale on it a couple of days ago(I posted this on the forum). One payment, and the program is yours FOREVER(plus FREE upgrades)- and I would say in the aspects of LINE ART, it's better than Photoshop. This program is designed for MAKING COMICS.