This review will be pretty unfair because I hate he high-fantasy genre, so this review is kind of useless to you, but I did say I would say my exact honest thoughts reading it so I'm not gonna pretend to like a genre that I don't like. But with that said I think the setting is quite interesting and not suuuuppeerr cliche, I mean on a scale of 1-10 interestingness it's like a 6.5-7 for me. (Again this is a useless grading because I don't like high fantasy.) Like I'm a little curious about why the blue marks are special. Upon reading the first ten pages I'm very confused about what everyone's names are and what gender everyone is and what's going on. I mean maybe it's just me but it's something to consider. Skipping to the middle part now because I'm a bit bored.
Wow the font is so much easier to read. The art is SO MUCH CLEANER AND BETTER!! I feel much much less like closing my eyes to let them rest when reading it now. Skipped to last few chapters, felt that the middle part's art is more easy on the eye. I don't really like the coloring for the entire comic, it looks like the kind where you use a 60% opacity brush and like brush brush brush, which is my most hated style of coloring, also it's the type where you just change it to different shades and not different hues, which is also my most hated style of coloring. It's like the wikihow coloring style. I felt that the best looking pages were the black and white lineart ones. It's boring to me so I can't sit through the entire comic to find out the plot, sorry, but if you summarise it for me I'll give my thoughts on it. Sorry this was a really useless review but your comic doesn't seem shitty, it just doesn't seem very special and is a tiny bit mediocre. Take everything I just said with a grain of salt though because this is really like a genre and subject matter that I find incredibly boring. Keep up the good work though and good luck!
