Positive feedback for Kamikaze has been amazing, especially here on Tapastic!
Readers love
- The visuals and the world building. We get a lot of compliments on how we build out backgrounds, do our lighting, and incorporate dynamic paneling for action scenes. Our readers especially love the character expressions too.
- The characters. Our lovely readers are always posting about how they enjoy the characters, especially our lead Markesha and her two supporting guys Toshi and Orson. We've been LOL-but-no-seriously told that if we do ANTYHING to Markesha's dad Toshi the team will have hell to pay.
- The story/writing. This is one of the things that makes me beam, because it's something I work especially hard on. They love the way we "show don't tell," expand on the world building in our description area, and how we use staging and visuals to express something without a character needing to say it.
On the flipside of all this, our readers think our work is funny, which...I never really intended? Like yeah, we have funny moments but it's not something I mean to do. For example, there's a scene I wrote where Markesha and her dad have an unwelcome visitor and they're all talking through the door. I meant this scene to be really tense and foreboding, but when it came to the live read, and then the final product it had people really laughing! I was kind of frustrated with that, but I guess I'll have to toss that up to a happy accident.
One problem I do find myself running up against is that I'm trying to make the antagonists seem real, and not just super evil for the sake of being evil or whatever. We have concerns that we're making the antagonists TOO relatable, and therefore not a threat. Not quite sure how to fix that and retain the 'shades of grey' aspect to the storytelling. Any tips on that would be helpful if y'all got em!