I actually like what I have except for the first chapter/prologue which I'm redoing, because it's the typical "tell info about system/world not show" fantasy prologue. Otherwise I think my pacing and characters are pretty solid, I have a good plot, art and dialogue. I can refine it more, and I will at parts, but I still thing what I have is good, or else I woudn't put it out there. I'm afraid of not doing my story idea and characters justice, but that's because I think they deserve justice in the first place. I honestly enjoy reading the story, I know my characters have depth and they feel real, which really helps my readers stick with it and subscribe even though my story starts off slooow. But with the new prologue of my story I think should balance out the initial slow chapters. So yeah, I think I got a good thing going on, but need to figure how to make it more fast paced, hard hitting right off the bat and flashier. I do think my story has substance, but it needs more spectacle and hook.