I actually have to agree here, character design is something that I do enjoy in a series, which is one reason I have a hard time watching Mob Pyscho and other times it's just great. That's one of the reasons I put so much detail into the A.O.G Armors, I want them to look really cool, and even the non armored characters and demons I tried to make look pretty cool (Though sometimes "regular" street cloths are hard to think of).
As for the text in a story, as long as the story doesn't sound like it was written by a 6 yr old or a pre teen going through puberty (Too many innuendos) I'm fine with it, given that there is a story to begin with, I don't want something like Teen Titans Go or the rebooted Ben 10, that just drives me up the wall.