Oh and i'll add one more thing what @keii4ii said:
Don't be nervous about your style, from what i can see, you're still fresh from drawing, and if you're envy to X or Y's style, use that envy as a inspiration, improvement takes while per se ^^
And don't worry, no one will say "you're drawing sucks!" except for your RL friends, or relatives, because that's how world works :v
(some of my RL friends says that my style is "ugly" but i just brush it off because it's a pointless and useless criticism)