OK, I fully admit I'm not 100% in love with my first page.
I started with a establishing shot, then I go straight into the action. I guess it is a bit cliche but I tried not to linger too much on it.
I think this opening scene in a flashback (this chapter is not posted yet) is much stronger personally. It has a much better establishing shot and establishes the two characters a lot better.
I guess my style is more just going straight into the story and not worrying about large wordy introductions.