1) Are there any babies, adored siblings (child or no) or small children in your story?
No babies, but there are a few small children. Most notably a scene in Ch03 featuring Child Kyara (though the scene in question isn't what I'd call wholesome haha)
2) Do any of your MC have anyone they consider their sworn enemy or hate with a passion?
Kyara and Zack start out not having that. Grayson, however, does (it's Kyara)
3) Do you have more fight/running for your life/training montage scenes or emotional conversations?
I'd like to think I have a balanced mix of both.
4) Does your MC have at least one loyal friend who would die for them?
Abolutely yes.
5) Is it evident that at least one of your characters has a crush on someone within the first ten chapters?
I wanna say yes, subtle, but yes. I've had people tell me some panels has their "shipping alarm" going off haha
(I also only have 5 chapters, but then again, I think what you call chapters here I call episodes?)
6) Is the love interest someone they've known for a long time, or a dashing, overly powerful or talented stranger?
They've known them for a while now 
7) How often do you reference dead relatives, or loved ones (that probably gave a lot of advice)?
Not very often, but Kyara's late mother has a looming pressence in the story.
8) Is your MC grossly more talented or powerful than any reasonable person should be?
I would say no. Kyara is very skilled in what she does, but she tends to also be very lucky. Plus, her actions come with consequences.
9) Is the color palette of their world (or the novel cover) more colorful, or dark?
While I have a bit of a muted taste of color, the world itself is pretty darn colorful. From the enviroments to the character designs. Though I'll take those colors away when the story asks for it, but then that's more for dramatic effect than the reality of the world.
10) Has somebody been kissed within the first 20 chapters?
In the first 20 chapters/episodes? No. Will there be a kiss(es) down the line? Yes
