@brilliiant Hello there! I read the first 4 episodes of your comic! here are my thoughts:
I was really taken in by the design of your title page which hooked me immediately. overall, your artwork in the first episode is not bad. It can be a little stiff, but the characters are all really expressive despite this and you use them for really good visual storytelling
Our first interaction between Amara and Brair makes up for any doubts someone might have about the artwork. I was drawn in by the fun chatting between these two on page 1; it feels really natural and I could almost hear their conversation in my head (this goes for all other dialogue and banter among the characters so far).
The characters so far are easy to recognize albeit, their introductions feel a little rushed, but who remembers all of their new coworkers immediately, right? ;D
However, I did get lost around the second half of page two because I didn't know which balloon to read first. Unfortunately, this is where I think you might lose most readers. The characters still have cute interactions, but Amara (and by extension the reader) is given loads of information from coworker names, to the history of the founder and what he does to his employees. This is obviously key information you are providing but it is unfortunate that it comes after a confusing section of panels. This section also just comes a little too strongly as "exposition dumping" within, otherwise, really smooth and fun dialogue. I think you did a much better job with the backstory aspects in ep 3-4 by including more visuals to go with Peter's story
On a final note, I will keep reading. Your dialogue and the overall expression in your artwork is really strong and I want to know how this whole gods thing turns out for our cast of characters
If anyone is interested here is my comic: