Will edit your blurbs (for free)

[AwesomeSoFar]

You know how a lot of the time people would rather be comfortably unhappy than do something they're scared of? prefer to just survive their bad situation instead of trying to change it for the better? that's basically the idea.

[AwesomeSoFar]

I think this one could use a bit of expanding, on account of 'alien realm' and 'unknown dangers'. Those are both a bit too vague.

Hey, I'm trying to edit these blurbs, and I'm not sure how to expand on "alien realm" or "unknown dangers". how would you suggest I make these terms less vague?

[MShadowlawn]

Hey, heard you're gonna coach my blurb, so here goes!

Urban Wolf blurb

June had cursed her bad luck for nearly all her life. One dark night, she set foot on the train platform to escape her past… But it seems whatever dark cloud’s been hanging over her followed her.

The train ticket took her to Halych, the illustrious city that thrives in the daylight and hides great darkness in its shadows. It’s just her luck, then, that she ends up in an underground gang war against a drug cartel.

It’s just her luck, then, that the swordmaster can’t seem to escape the blood, the danger, and all the choices she didn’t want to have to make.

But worst of all is how—despite all her soul-searching—she can’t even escape her own shadow.

This story will contain frequent displays of graphic violence, harsh language, and touches on topics of moral ambiguity and the usage of hard drugs.

For anyone who might be interested based off of that alone, I present my work:

Urban Wolf: On The Run | Tapas