Will Review First Four Chapters of Your Novel

coppermouflon 2021-08-25 16:34:18 UTC #19

Oh, what the hell, why not?

It'd be good to get some feedback from more people.

I hope you are at least entertained.

hamza9644 2021-08-25 16:51:11 UTC #20

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hamza9644 2021-08-25 16:51:33 UTC #21

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MShadowlawn 2021-08-25 19:41:41 UTC #22

Well, if you're offering...

I present to you my candidate.

Crimson_B 2021-08-27 09:50:52 UTC #24

Here's mine

FlorenceV 2021-08-27 14:55:50 UTC #25

I love feedbacks!

samvv000 2021-08-27 18:51:32 UTC #26

Okay, cleared four of the new batch of requests. Some I feel like I couldn't provide that much of an in-depth critique, but it was either because I felt like I couldn't provide enough of my own experience/logic to the sections I would've changed, or just had no real things I would've changed. I really liked the vibe of @Writenry's story, and I had very little actual points of critique to give there besides "yeah, I liked that".

Hope people overall got something out of it, though!

Should be able to get around to the remaining two sometime tomorrow.

In the meantime, feel free to keep them coming!

Also, I released a second chapter of my story, so if you wanna check that out, feel free to, as well:

neidarous 2021-08-27 20:22:43 UTC #27

Here's mine

N1ghtm4r3 2021-08-28 01:26:35 UTC #28

try mine out

unnamedbastards 2021-08-28 06:58:10 UTC #29

Hi this is my medieval fantasy webcomic tell me what do you think

samvv000 2021-08-28 07:56:03 UTC #30

I've read all of the remaining submissions! Reviews may have to come tomorrow after all, though, since I got my second shot yesterday and I am having a time(tm) at the moment. Would much rather like to get back to people with a clear head, if that's alright.

One thing I'd like to mention really quickly though is that, while I've read the comic submissions and am more than happy to give my general impressions, as the title of the thread says, I would primarily like to give feedback to novels. The simple truth is that I don't know how to properly critique comics, and I understand it's a lot more difficult to take feedback-on board after the fact -- editing a paragraph is always different than needing to edit or re-structure a set of panels. And things like art are a lot more to comment on in general, since the most I can draw is a stick-man.

That said, I will still get back to all of the comics submitted now, or after the fact, but with the caveat my feedback might just not be that useful.

vholdfield 2021-08-28 08:55:26 UTC #31

I would love a review on my novel if you don't mind

samvv000 2021-08-28 13:09:30 UTC #32

With the exception of the new submission and Knights Chronicles, I think I've gotten back to everyone so far...

Feel free to keep 'em coming.

That said, I would really appreciate if the people would also take the time to look through my own work in return if they haven't already -- I'm not really asking for likes or subscriptions; I have no interest in that; but I would appreciate some general thoughts. It's only two chapters (with the third one coming out later today).

An_Alias 2021-08-28 16:27:55 UTC #33

Hello
I also started a new writing project that I think i need some general feedback on.

samvv000 2021-08-29 18:58:42 UTC #34

Okay... I think this more or less clears my backlog for the time being!

In the meantime, chapter 3 of my own novel is out! Feel free to check it out!

Wocalich 2021-08-29 19:05:14 UTC #35

Hello, if you're still doing this I'd love for you to review the first four episodes of my novel. Here is the link:

I will check out your novel now.

Edit: Oh, I knew I had seen your name somewhere! Thank you for liking the first episode a few days ago!

Crimson_B 2021-08-31 10:37:49 UTC #36

@samvv000 thank you for your invaluable feedback. When I eventually decide to rewrite or just edit my novel I will keep what you've pointed out in mind. Once again, thank you

samvv000 2021-08-31 18:36:53 UTC #37

Okay! Once again, I've gotten back to everyone, I'd say, even to someone who asked me to take a look at their story again after they'd made some improvements.

Doors are still open!

Shazic 2021-08-31 19:37:44 UTC #38

Hi im rewriting but i have rewrited my first 4 chapter i want to now what at lest somone think of them because im struggling to wondering if it was even worth the time to do this rewriting them since im kind of rewriting the story uggg but yeah t i hope its good if not i don't even know why i bothered

samvv000 2021-09-02 18:19:32 UTC #39

Sssssssstiiiill doin this