So, don't know if the reviews are still on offer, hope they are otherwise nobody is reading this...
If they are, here is my story.
In Z Finite
https://tapas.io/series/In-Z-Finite-Eng
Genres: Adventure, Action, Comedy, Fantasy
Synopsis:
This is the story of Zarco, a young guy with a magic stone and not much else, and Caelum, a wingless "angel".
"Caelum
-That's stupid...
Zarco
-Eh, it is..."
Ahem, anyway, a lot of action & adventure awaits them, as they are forced together on a journey in search of some magic stones of legendary power.
"Zarco
-Liar! We're currently doing a lot more of "trying to survive" than rock picking around here!
Caelum
-Yeah, that is pretty misleading."
Ok, screw this, I am out, if nobody read this story it will be your fault.
"Zarco
-The hell are you talking about, you're the one who wrote this...
Caelum
-Since our writer is unreliable, I will finish this. This story at its core is just a fun rump, focused on action, adventure, and a lot of comedic dialogue and exchanges. If you had at least a chuckle reading this then you will probably enjoy the story.
Zarco
-Yo, thanks for reading till this point, we will meet again at the pages."
Four chapters should be more than enough for you to get the story's tone and idea, but, I hope the story is good enough to make you want to read more.
I would prefer if you post your review as a comment, since that would make it easier for me to find it and read it.
On the criticism front, no need to hold your punches, I like honest criticism so I can improve.
Though, I must warn you that English is not my native language, the story should still be pretty easy to read, but you might find some weird sentences or a grammar mistake here and there, feel free to point them out if you want.