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Hey, thanks for the offer. I don't know if they will be good practice but could you draw my main duo? I like to collect drawings of them. [image] [image][image][image] Since they come from multiple artists there is a lot of variation in their designs, so feel free to take some artistic liber…

Mar 13, '22

How to write a power system?

Questions

Depends, ideally, the sooner the audience knows how things work the better, but you got to consider things like pacing, in the first chapter you will have to introduce a lot, so you will have to decide which is more important. I would give preference to the characters introduction, but you may fin…

Mar 13, '22

How to write a power system?

Questions

Yes, it is, you just need to have the power system deeply linked to the lore/world-building, and have it function in favor of the story, by facilitating or enabling the events of the plot and character beats, this will make it seems natural.

Mar 1, '22

Post any comic/novel here and I will give it a shot for ~5 pages (REACT EDITION)

Thanks for doing this, I am always looking for more critique and reviews of my story, so you can be as blunt and honest about your opinions as you wish. +react

Mar 1, '22

Just your COVER and LINK

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Feb 23, '22

Promote your series here!

Well, I guess I could try a little promotion. So, my story genres are Action, Adventure, Fantasy, and Comedy. Which means it is supposed to be fun, if I am doing it right at least. If anyone gives it a try, hope you enjoy it.

Jan 9, '22

I'll review your work!

Hello there, thanks for the offer, if you're still giving feedback I would like exactly what you offered, your honest thoughts about the story since I want to know its flaws so that I can fix them and make the story better. Also, the story is Action, Adventure, Comedy, Fantasy, and probably there …

Jan 9, '22

Happy to review!

Hey there, thanks for the offer. I don't mind waiting a lot for the review since you probably still have a lot of works to review, but if you do read it, I ask for you to give your honest thoughts about the story, no need to hold back. Also, the story is Action, Adventure, Comedy, Fantasy, and pro…

Oct 24, '21

I'll draw your oc

Hey, thanks for the offer. So, could you draw my main duo? I like to collect drawings of them. [image] [image] [image] [image] Since they come from multiple artists there is a lot of variation in their designs, so feel free to take some artistic liberties if you want to. One is a blue-ha…

Oct 20, '21

Offering Story Feedback

Hey, thanks for the offer. I think I will go with the INTENSE difficulty. So, for when you have the time and one of these slots open... Here is my story.

Oct 20, '21

Blurb Review Thread

Ok then, no problem.

Oct 19, '21

Blurb Review Thread

Also, I know it is not the topic of this discussion, so feel free to ignore it. But since you have gone through the trouble of reading my story, could you tell me what you think of it? I am always looking for reviews and critiques of my work so I can improve. Again, just to emphasize, feel fre…

Oct 19, '21

Blurb Review Thread

Thank you very much, I will try to give a little more information on the blurb without making it too big.

Oct 19, '21

Blurb Review Thread

Huh, interesting, I was looking for something like this. My summary/blurb/description is a pretty unusual one, since it was made to catch the reader's attention and give them a taste of the story's vibe, instead of properly informing the reader about the plot, world-building and etc. So I am pre…

Oct 18, '21

Ranks & Job Titles in an Intergalactic Empire

In that case, those responsible for the "Economy", would be responsible for administrating the resources needed for combat, such as food production for the soldiers, metals for the weapons, etc.

Oct 15, '21

Ranks & Job Titles in an Intergalactic Empire

Well, it depends on the nature of this empire, it would probably need someone managing the empire's propaganda though. You can also take inspiration from real-life ministers from governments, for example, realistically speaking, there should be someone focused on each major economical revenue of t…

Oct 14, '21

"Immortal" and Mortal romance issue

Questions

Well, the answer is... it depends. Your main issue will be about their mental age and to establish some sense of equality in their relationship. The reader will need to feel like the characters are on the same level, otherwise, it might be weird, awkward, or even problematic.

Oct 13, '21

What is power scaling?

Power scaling is basically just comparing characters to get a better notion of the... well, scaling of power. Basically, it works like this, if character A beats character B, and character B is stronger than character C, then we can extrapolate that character A is stronger than character C. It i…

Oct 13, '21

Can “dream / coma” endings be good?

Well, I don't really get what you're going for here... I mean, you already know that a dream/coma ending can detract from the story, since it will leave the reader with an empty feeling, because if it wasn't real, therefore didn't matter. So, with that said, why do you want that? I mean, what pu…

Oct 11, '21

Please, I need help with ideas for a romance plot

Well, good luck then, glad I could help.

Oct 11, '21

Reading everything posted in here!

Here is the summary: This is the story of Zarco, a young guy with a magic stone and not much else, and Caelum, a wingless "angel". "Caelum -That's stupid... Zarco -Eh, it is..." Ahem, anyway, a lot of action & adventure awaits them, as they are forced together on a journey in search of some …

Oct 11, '21

Promote your story with what makes it special!

Hey there. A tough challenge for me... I have never been really good with promotion, but that wouldn't stop me from trying! Well, let's drop the genres first: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Comedy. Now, this story's selling point is its characters, I strive to make fun and interesting dialogue fu…

Oct 11, '21

Please, I need help with ideas for a romance plot

How about this, imagine a checklist but instead of plot events, such as beating the bad guy, or reaching a place, it is a checklist of events signalizing the progress of their relationship, aka. the emotional beats of their story. Then you write your plot focusing around those important events, wi…

Oct 11, '21

Please, I need help with ideas for a romance plot

Well, my advice would be, make the romance deeply connected and relevant to the story. You shouldn't fit the romance into the adventure, but instead deeply link it to the adventure, to the point you can't have one without the other. Now, for their relationship, the first things you've gotta figu…

Oct 6, '21

Shameless promotion, come join and promote away

Congrats! I hope I can finish my current work someday too, though I am just getting started so there is still a lot to write. Well, here is the story. For those that wanna know its genres, it is action, adventure, fantasy, comedy. And here is the summary: This is the story of Zarco, a you…

Oct 6, '21

Art Block - would love to sketch your OCs! [requests closed]

Wow, your art is great! Thanks for the drawing.

Oct 6, '21

Art Block - would love to sketch your OCs! [requests closed]

Hey there, could you draw my main duo? I like to collect random drawings of them. [image][image][image][image] Since they come from multiple artists there is a lot of variation in their designs, so feel free to take some artistic liberties if you want to. One is a blue-haired show-off kinda gu…

Sep 21, '21

Will Review First Four Chapters of Your Novel

Meh, don't worry about it, you're doing people a favor here, even if you were to just stop because of personal reasons no one should complain. So keep it up at your own time.

Sep 5, '21

Let Them Know That Your Comic/Novel Exists!

So, yeah, like a lot my novel doesn't have a lot of views, and I really people to know it exists. Then, for those interested, here is my story. In Z Finite https://tapas.io/series/In-Z-Finite-Eng Genres: Adventure, Action, Comedy, Fantasy Synopsis: This is the story of Zarco, a young guy …

Sep 5, '21

Will Review First Four Chapters of Your Novel