Will I click on it?
This strikes me as something that may be adorably deceptive. Like ok, we’ve got a cute little chicken heading off on an adventure. Innocent enough. But there are aspects that imply maybe some more mature themes. The title has a somewhat ominous ring to it and gives off a sort of mystery vibe. Same with the font choice. The art, while simplistic, cute and colorful, isn’t overly bright and obnoxious like you would find on a children’s book. The character has a somewhat serious expression, and I suspect he’s going to be learning some valuable life lessons in this story.
What can be better
That depends on what you’re trying to achieve here. I’m not an artist, so I can’t give too much advice in that aspect, but I suppose the overall tone might come off as a little ambiguous? Like is this a cute and happy story or something more action/adventure?
100% honest opinion
What, you think I lied in my first opinion? Lol that pretty much summed it up. Hope you found it helpful!