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Thank you very much tough I am trying to improve the tittle I think it is too out of focus I will do a new cover as we reach the end of the first story

Thanks for participate, I will read the novel, there's always things to improve. I know you can make it! So far the cover looks interesting :slight_smile:

Here's my first ever novel "A Fool's Wish" to summarize it's about a girl that makes a deal with the devil to gain magical power and rewind time and stop the death of her childhood friend.


A novel about folklore and a Mother's grief and duty. The title and description are probably a little misleading. :smirk:

Here's mine

I definitely know I have to rewrite the beginning, but I'd like to know how my writing stands now. If anything, I'd like to know if my writing has improved at all comparing the first few chapters to the last few.

I've chosen to write in a present tense/ third person POV which turns off a lot of readers.

If that doesn't deter you, please feel free to let me know your thoughts.


Cover by Red Lenai

Brand new series. Just started:

Finished the first season of my battle shonen story.

Here's mine!

Hi everyone!
Here's The Two Other Species, my first novel. It's a fantasy with a bit of romance and overpowered character, updates every Friday at 2:30 am PST. Please subscribe and like if you want to keep reading, Thanks