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Jul 2021

Thanks for participate, I will read the novel, there's always things to improve. I know you can make it! So far the cover looks interesting :slight_smile:

Here's my first ever novel "A Fool's Wish" to summarize it's about a girl that makes a deal with the devil to gain magical power and rewind time and stop the death of her childhood friend.


A novel about folklore and a Mother's grief and duty. The title and description are probably a little misleading. :smirk:

Here's mine

I definitely know I have to rewrite the beginning, but I'd like to know how my writing stands now. If anything, I'd like to know if my writing has improved at all comparing the first few chapters to the last few.

I've chosen to write in a present tense/ third person POV which turns off a lot of readers.

If that doesn't deter you, please feel free to let me know your thoughts.


Cover by Red Lenai

Brand new series. Just started:

Finished the first season of my battle shonen story.

Here's mine!

Hi everyone!
Here's The Two Other Species, my first novel. It's a fantasy with a bit of romance and overpowered character, updates every Friday at 2:30 am PST. Please subscribe and like if you want to keep reading, Thanks


9 days later

Hi everyone!
Thanks for share your stories, seeing all the talent that you have for me is a motivation to keep writing. I will read some novels and will post my feedback in these days.

P.D.: Sorry for my ausence, I just needed some time for me and for inspiration.
Also if you like isekai novels, I'm pretty sure Ausragner is your best option hehehe (sorry for that :sweat_smile:).
Thanks again :heart_eyes:

That's my first novel. It's about hardship to start living your life as an adult. Involve love between two men. In general, I'm aiming for lightweight story :slight_smile:

awww I love your book cover, it shows me a lot of emotions. I will read it :slight_smile: