Lil_Slime

It’s not much, but I did just recently draw a chibi [image]

Mar 3, '20

More critique please

Hey guys, so I just recently finished chapter one of my comic, and I really want to improve on the rest of my comic a lot more (and potentially redo the first chapter, too). So yeah, here I am, asking for criticism. Anywho, the thing I’m mainly looking for here is what did I do wrong (I.e. what an…

Mar 3, '20

Need advice on form

Thanks! I think I get it. So I should try to imagine the feeling of the subject, right?

Mar 3, '20

Need advice on form

Oh! I think I can kinda get it now! Thanks!

Feb 28, '20

Need advice on form

I see! Thanks! You helped out a lot!

Feb 28, '20

Need advice on form

I see, thanks! Say, how do you translate it into stylized drawing?

Feb 27, '20

Need advice on form

Thanks! I suppose I do prefer 2D more, but perhaps that’s just because of my inability to process 3D objects as effectively. Anyways, so drawing stylistically wouldn’t require as much 3D rendering?

Feb 27, '20

Need advice on form

Thanks! I really love how you interpreted this! Although I cannot say that as of the moment, I have the cognitive capability to process 3D objects the way you do, but I’ll get there sometime. By the way, how can lines be used to represent these interactions? Like, what kind of techniques should be…

Feb 27, '20

Need advice on form

Thanks! XD I CAN TOTALLY RELATE TO THE BUMPING INTO THINGS AND STUFF AHAHAHAHA. Anyways, I’ll try out 3D modeling, though since I don’t exactly have a good computer I can’t say I’d be able to practice that as much. Also, I’m not too comfortable with painting as I am a tad too line-dependent, but I’l…

Feb 27, '20

Need advice on form

Thanks! I’ll look up proko’s youtube channel!

Feb 26, '20

Need advice on form

Hey guys, so I need advice on learning form. My question is pretty much just this: “how do you force yourself to grasp 3D objects well enough to draw things as such?” I’ve been really struggling in this aspect and advice would be very much appreciated, thanks!

Feb 3, '20

I want to promote YOUR comic on Youtube!

Reviews | Feedback

I haven’t done much pages yet, but well, since chapter 1 is about to end, here goes nothing It’s a fantasy/comedy

Jan 8, '20

Post the Latest Thing You Drew

I absolutely love it!

Jan 8, '20

"Why won't you read my comic?" A thread for getting honest reader first impressions

Oh ho, that looks really good! I know I haven’t mentioned this, but I’m a sucker for shading, so that may have affected my feedback, but nevertheless! I love it. Also, the deadish colors seem like an artistic choice in the new one (heck, They make the pic look even better) so it really heightens the…

Jan 8, '20

"Why won't you read my comic?" A thread for getting honest reader first impressions

So, I’m revisiting this thread, and I suppose I’ll have another shot at criticism (though I’m not very good at it) @tired_programmer Ok, so I’ve only read through the first chapter, but your premise is really interesting and it shows promise. I like how much thought you put into your world-buildin…

Dec 26, '19

"Why won't you read my comic?" A thread for getting honest reader first impressions

Oh! This helps quite a lot! Thanks! That tutorial is topnotch, too! Anyways, I’ll work on cutting the dialogue more, and everything else you’ve told me! This really helped me a lot, ‘cause I already knew my art was bad, but I didn’t know how to improve it, haha. So, thanks for the feedback!

Dec 25, '19

"Why won't you read my comic?" A thread for getting honest reader first impressions

Oh yes, it’s the fight scene with garrett. Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, the realism bit has always been my issue, I’ve been looking into proportions and real life references for some time now but I’ve always struggled with stuff like that, hehe. Oh, yeah, I should probably look into facial expre…

Dec 24, '19

"Why won't you read my comic?" A thread for getting honest reader first impressions

Hmm yes, this is a very good idea. Honestly, I always struggle with this and end up asking for feedback too much. Anyways! @Eightfish Here are some of the negative things I noticed in your comic: 1. While I do like the simplistic style of coloring, I feel like your color palette is a little bland, i…

Dec 20, '19

Newbie Looking To Grow - Mutual Subs?

Ooh, interesting. Well, nice to meet you! I'm also pretty new to Tapas so I wanna make more friends here and all, so yeah! Anyways, your novel looks super promising so you can expect me to stick around! P.S.: I know I've been here for a few months now but hey, compared to the majority, I'm really …

Dec 20, '19

General feedback, though if you do see a more specific problem, please do mention it

Dec 18, '19

Ooh thank you! I’ll test how the text size looks on mobile! And, as always, I’ll keep on practicing!

Dec 18, '19

Thanks so much I'll make sure to keep your advice in mind!

Dec 17, '19

Hey guys! So being the dumb dumb that I am, I’ve only just fairly recently realized that these forums existed, anyways, I suppose this is a good time to ask for criticism and feedback. Like, I know my comic is very new right now and I’m not uploading as much as other creators, but I just want to kno…

Dec 17, '19

Describe your comic in 5 words!

I will draw your OC and maybe color to get inspiration and out of art block

Tiny priestess screws people over

Dec 5, '19

Off Topic

If you’re still looking for requests, here’s my oc, Lily. She’s around 16 to 17, she’s an adventurer whose class is priestess. Sorry if this sounds too anime-ish [image] Edit: Oh yeah, for more backstory, here’s a link to the comic:

Nov 3, '19

Show me your cute comics!

It’s really new and I’m not sure if it’s what you consider to be “cute”. But hey, can’t hurt to put it here, right?

Nov 3, '19

New Comics Under 10 Episodes

Super new to this. So yeah.

Nov 3, '19

Less than 10 subscribers! Share your uber-new comic here