NotBeatrix
Valerie B Trix
Thanks so much!!! I had a blast reading your comments lmao. And believe me, you have NO IDEA how much I just want to spoil it. We got so much twists and turns! Good luck on your finals and your novel!
@NotBeatrix Read your story. I don't normally like reading novels, but your story managed to catch my attention. I was able to picture everything that was going on. Like I was reading a comic. I'm surprised you only have 11 subscribers. Here's my comic:
This is way too detailed. But of course, I didn't feel offended instead, thanks for pointing out the issue so clearly so that I can make a change. Regarding the info dump issue. I had several feedback from both SH and RR. They do asked me to change it. And I guess this was the most minimal I can …
@NotBeatrix There is one thing that caught me dumbfounded. I wasn't sure why but I'm pretty sure that you have less exposure than any other did in this community. Your English is superb! I am not saying this to please you, but I'll be sincere here. I've read quite an amount of other author creation…
Ok, for your story: I like it! I like the fantasy elements, and a story about royal families is always interesting. My only problem is that I can't access the music the other reviews are talking about. (I'll do some more feedback if you want some) Here's mine:
this is really good feedback, thank you so much!
Looking for an Editor to help with grammatical corrections and to ensure the story is heading in the right direction. Preferably someone with lots of experience in writing webtoons. Please dm or reply with your rate and send some examples of your work. The more examples the higher the chances of bei…
Hello, I'm looking for 2-5 writers to come on board with me for a project to create/build a world for a comic book project test. I've placed topics/genres etc., into an app and will click the generate button to get a mash-up of everything we will create from the topic to the genre/setting, etc. I'…
I'm considering creating an app that uses webtoons to teach languages and am trying to get a better idea of what the costs would be and see if there would be interested people in this community. The webtoons would be much shorter than most you'd find on Tapas. Most stories would be around 2000-40…
I am currently doing the same task as well. Well, I'll drop my work in here. Assume this was the post from year ago, I bet you'd complete your book? Mine if you drop it here again? Here's mine:
Oh, yeah, I don't remember getting that and if I did I can't find it now. So, yeah, Here you go:
Okay finally read you @NotBeatrix First all ooooooh the music ! Like this isn't what I usually listen but this is so good and so fitting to the story ! We can see it's not chosen random and that you take time to choose your track with care. OOOOOH I love badass sexy nuns. Gave me some Chrono Cru…
I read the first two chapters (I can only read so many novel chapters in a go) and overall I really liked it! It worked very well and I was very impressed by how the action was handled. I am not too good at following action sequences, but this managed to remain exciting while also being something I …
I totally understand, I have a high tolerance also and so it was a learning curve for me too. Tapas doesn't give very much detail as to what is considered mature when it comes to violence 
I would say the first 3 are pretty graphic. You have the vampire getting blown up, Nina getting attacked, then …
So I read the first four episodes and must I say that you did a wonderful job! Everything from the music to the descriptive scenery to the raw emotions of the characters. Your novel is very well made for what I've read so far and am already interested in the character dynamics between Sister Nina an…
I am coming back to this 
@NotBeatrix
I left you comments and likes as I read and also made notes so I wouldn't forget anything 
Overall, I love your writing style. You do well to establish and maintain your character voices. I also love your use of descriptions and your utilization of figurati…
Thank you so much for reading through it! This is exactly what I needed! The first few chapters gave me such a headache, because I had a feeling that I'd fallen into that writing trap where the author knows so clearly what's happening that they end up being too vague/confusing. I've been avoiding ma…
I've seen a lot of posts in the forum about deeper meaning for your work and how to go about it or if it is needed. Posts about what you want things to mean, careful crafting to get your message across. I see a lot of agonizing to make certain to convey your message, what to add, what to subtract…
I would like the opportunity and would love to read and give feedback as well. I can do it anywhere between tomorrow and Sunday 🧐 (more than likely sooner). I will like and leave comments then give a little breakdown here [:tapa_pop:]
So I read the chapters you have up and I have to say, I am thoroughly invested. I grew up watching Westerns and being a Texan I relate a lot to this type of story. I'm really interested in seeing how things progress ^_^ That said I do think you may have to mark some of the more intense chapters as…
This is a great opportunity for me to grow! Here's my novel. It's post-apocalyptic and I'll definitely give your book a review when I can!
This sounds really great and feedback on my novel has been really helpful before! I will read your novel when I have some free time tomorrow. Also this list is quite big so if you can't get to it I understand 
Heres my fantasy novel:
Oh man, I love going down rabbit holes about etymology, it's so much fun! I was trying to think of an alternative but it is tough. Depending on the year the story takes place, it might be technically correct anyways! It led me to read an interesting article about the word "quiz" so I've had an educa…
My story also has exactly six chapters haha 
I'm up for a feedback for feedback exchange ^^ though I'm only available from Monday. I'll have to wait until then to do it if you are okay with that 
I'm game. I'm interested in feedback on the characters as a whole and their progression through the series.
I've just finished! Oh my goodness this story!! 
First Impressions:
As soon as I played the music for the first chapter, I knew I was in for a good time!
The stand-off between Nina and the vampire was a fantastic hook. Nina has a very strong voice, and I really got a sense of her personality,…
First of all ! Thank you so much for all your comments! You truly made my day ! It means so much to me. Also thank you for this very detailed feedback. This is the first one I get, that into the details tbh. I will proofread myself better yes, thank you very much for telling me. I need this kind o…
The summary of Blood Cross has my interest PIQUED. I absolutely love the concept of a vampire and a nun having adventures in the Wild West
If you still have time, I'd love to exchange some feedback! Would you like me to PM you or post it here?
“You’re Not a Good Writer.” I once received a DM comprised of just that sentence. Nothing else. No constructive criticism or any reason as to why this person clearly agreed with my own view of myself. For someone who has never told anyone in their real life that they write anything, reading some…