
NotBeatrix
Valerie B Trix
Thanks! I really do appreciate your kind words! And okay, I've just finished reading your comic so far, and can I say I fell in LOVE. I don't have any feedback to give besides the fact the chapters are little short, but besides that it's GOLDEN. I really do love it! The art style is gorgeous and eve…
Don't worry about it, the music section has been long removed from Tapas writing station. Okay, now, I've just read a few chapters of your comic book. Since this feedback is a comic book I'll format the feedback a little differently than I would a book/novel. Art Style: The art style is so ad…
Thanks! I'll get started on yours likely today or tomorrow!
Thank you!! I really do appreciate hearing that, your kind words almost made me cry~!
Okay! I just finished reading your book, and here are my first impressions and feedback: First Impressions: I love the first line, 'Is it me, or is my imagination running wild for whatever things I think you would do here?' Really gives me an ominous feeling. I don't know who's speaking but I c…
Of course! Let me know if you need any clarification about anything I mentioned.
@Questionsforyou Hey, what's the status on this post?
@robinbhai What's the status on this post?
Hey there! I would love to do a feedback for feedback! And no, I actually haven't completed my work yet, since my main focus was on the other book I'm actually almost done with, and here's my book Tempest and Temptation. I'll be checking out yours today!
Okay. So I've just finished reading the first few chapters of your book. Here are some of my thoughts and impressions as I was reading. FIRST THOUGHTS AND IMPRESSIONS: Really ominous beginning, I get the feeling something bad happened but I don't know what yet. Now, I'm curious to find out.... …
Onto yours right now! I apologize for my delay!
THANK YOU. I appreciated your detailed review and I would like to apologize if I fell off the bandwagon with this thread! Did I ever complete your review? If I did not and you are still interested in receiving a review after all this time, please drop your book link here! I'll be sure to give a deta…
Really, I appreciated your warm words! Thank you again!
Did I ever complete your review? If I did not and you are still interested in receiving a review after all this time, please drop your book link here! I'll be sure to give a detailed and helpful review you deserve because I do not like leaving things incomplete!
Thank you! I appreciated your detailed review!
Thank you! I really did appreciate your feedback from all that time ago!
Apologies that I fell off the bandwagon with this thread! Did I ever complete your review? If I did not and you are still interested in receiving a review after all this time, please drop your book link here! I'll be sure to give a detailed and helpful review you deserve because I do not like leavin…
My apologies that I fell off the bandwagon with this thread! Did I ever complete your review? If I did not and you are still interested in receiving a review after all this time, please drop your book link here! I'll be sure to give a detailed and helpful review you deserve because I do not like lea…
Hii my apologies that I fell off the bandwagon with this thread! Did I ever complete your review? If I did not and you are still interested in receiving a review after all this time, please drop your book link here! I'll be sure to give a detailed and helpful review you deserve because I do not like…
Hey! My apologies that I fell off the bandwagon with this thread! Did I ever complete your review? If I did not and you are still interested in receiving a review after all this time, please drop your book link here! I'll be sure to give a detailed and helpful review you deserve because I do not lik…
Hi there, my apologies that I fell off the bandwagon with this thread! Did I ever complete your review? If I did not and you are still interested in receiving a review after all this time, please drop your book link here! I'll be sure to give a detailed and helpful review you deserve because I do no…
Hi there, my apologies that I fell off the bandwagon with this thread! Did I ever complete your review? If I did not and you are still interested in receiving a review after all this time, please drop your book link here! I'll be sure to give a detailed and helpful review you deserve because I do no…
Thank you for those warm words! Also, I appreciate you pointing out those things! I didn't recognize the writing seemed intense because I have such a low tolerance for these things lol. Could you tell me which chapters you would say are more intense and graphic? I certainly don't want to get trigger…
Okay! So, I've just finished reading the first 6 chapters of your book! So, here are some of my thoughts as I was reading! Chapter One: I love this atmosphere you're creating!!! So ominous and spooky! OMG this is so dark and spooky.... I'm so here for it. Chapter One Thoughts in a Nutshell…
Thank you!! Wow, that means a lot to hear! And, hehe, I'm glad you liked Zayne! As for the other comments, thank you for pointing that out! I'll be sure to fix it and watch out for any other errors! With Sister Quinn's Pop Quiz, yeah, you're totally right, I'm sorry that you out the story! I was …
Of course! And, ahh, I didn't realize you had influences from Final Fantasy XIV! I like that game series, I'm tying to get into Video Game Lore and Fantasy of it so I think that's interesting your story has influences from it!
AHAHA, I love it!
I think everyone can simultaneously agree that Light Novel titles leave a lot to be desired, and always leaves people questioning everything.
"The Time I Sold My Soul To A Loincloth God?"
Wow.
I have so many questions.
Well, while I'm here, here would be my story t…
Okay! So, I've just finished reading the first 6 chapters of your book! So, here are some of my thoughts as I was reading! Chapter One: THE MUSIC IS AMAZING! CAN THE MUSIC GET ANY BETTER? OMG WHY DOES IT FIT THE SCENE SO WELL? Oooh the premise is so fascinating! Kind of feels like I've been …
No problem!
Then, I'll be getting started on what I can on yours!
No need to apologize! I'm sorry, that's exactly the scene I'm referring to is, the cell scene. It seems I got the settings mixed up, in my head I thought she was in a car before she got dragged into the cell area. And no worries about the details, it was still very detailed, it just there moments …